Comments - Almost

JaMeS ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-19

Had to read that a few times but that was short sweet to the point very good i have enjoyed reading your work and ill be interested to read others

WiNgS Of StEeL ( F C ) at 2007-07-24

U sur do have a wonderful and brilliant way with words:D...if only all my poems came out this good hahah
ust loved it:D
gr8 job
tkae care
bree 5/5

oksana at 2007-09-02

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3

Corina at 2011-07-16

Your poem expresses your feelings really well. I loved reading it. Great job.

Corina

Eminent Bard ( P ) at 2011-07-22

I say this is soo cute..

"We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

this is my fav line..=)

Eminent Bard ( P ) at 2011-07-22

I say this is soo cute..

"We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

this is my fav line..=)

kristian Bisig ( F P C D ) at 2011-08-22

Wow this is perfect really just made it to the top of my list of favorites :) 5/5

A rose budding ( F P C D ) at 2011-08-26

Really nice poem. I see nothing that would need changing.
5/5

cycler73 ( F P C ) at 2011-09-22

Great poem. very wise and simple. well controlled and not over the top. good stuff!!

Jessi ( F P C D ) at 2011-10-29

Great Poem. Creative.
Everything A Poem Should Be.
:)
God Bless.

The Poet Behind The Poems ( F P C D ) at 2011-11-01

That last stranza was amazing simple yet powerful. .. I think we have simular styles you manged to bring true raw emotion. .. I loved it a master of the pen

Tony

Adreamer ( F P C D ) at 2011-12-23

This piece is so short, yet it really makes a statement. It is creative and so unique.


I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

This is a wonderful way to start, it is gripping and almost like a riddle, in the way it kind of makes people think.

I almost wrote a poem to you
But the words came out wrong
I almost said I love you
While you listened to my song

There is emotion here, but not the simple, basic, same overused, tiered mundane emotion of I love you. It stands out. And its a nice touch.

I almost went to heaven
Before I was a saint
We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint

This provides such imagery, while the rest of the piece is description. Either way it is fantastic. Excellent piece. 5/5

crystaljean88 ( F P C D ) at 2013-06-23

Love it.. very sweet n full of emotion.. my favourite stanza was

I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

reading this poem made me think of somebody special... good job 5/5

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-03-13

Love this. Gripping as always x


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