Comments - I WISH*

Kris ( P C ) at 2007-08-21

I Loved it.

fatima ( F C ) at 2007-08-22

Great job, this was a truely amazin poem, the concept of it all so unique and in touch with reality, it show your creativity and the passion you have for this person. i always love your poems your a great writer.x x x tc

Katrina marie ( F P C ) at 2007-08-22

Yes u were completly right i loved both of the poems u recomended:]..ur pretty good..what did u think of mine?

zacksmith ( F P ) at 2007-08-22

Wow, this poem is amazing, very nice work,

Alissa ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-22

Amazing, this was really sweet. It was so cute, I really liked it. It's really original!

sezz ( F P C ) at 2007-08-22

Awesome poem! i can actually feel ur desperation to get back whta u had, great work!

Milton ( F C D ) at 2007-08-22

I thought it was pretty nice. that part with the pants kind threw me off though. I thought it said you wish you were in her pants 0_o

but everything comes together well. you can see how close the feelings are in this. good stuff.

Koreena at 2007-08-22

Wow..it blew my mind. I wish i could heart that from the person i loved everyday! 5/5..!!
*beautiful*

GrAc3 ( F C ) at 2007-08-22

Omg.i love this poem very much:)
i wish i can be as great as you do:D*5

WiSHFUL THiNKER ( F D ) at 2007-08-22

That is so cute. I love it. bravo. :)

HASNT MY HEART LEARNED iTS LESSO ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-22

Good job 5/5

Hermosa ( C ) at 2007-08-22

Awe that was so sweet! I loved this poem

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2007-08-22

Awww very sweet poem!! i exspecially liked this stanza

"i wish i was your eye liner,
in your eyes id be,
finally theres a moment,
where all you see is me,"

very unique!! keep up the good work your doing great!! 5/5:)

Andrea at 2007-08-22

This is a heckka cutte poem i love it so freakin much you've got talent. I wish a guy would do this for me who ever this is for is a luckky girl :] good job

HASNT MY HEART LEARNED iTS LESSO ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-22

Really really good job i love this poem so much<3333 5/5

<333

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Megan at 2007-08-23

Wow I LOVEEEEE this!!!

~*You are my only one*~ ( F P ) at 2007-08-23

Oh my gosh this poem made me cry literally. Beautiful poem, by far the best I've read on here, and heard. Keep up the writing, thanks for checking my poetry out too.

Dreamgurl ( F C D ) at 2007-08-23

This is beautiful ~ I really loved it ~

Lynzie ( P ) at 2007-08-23

I really enjoyed reading this it is really sweet and i hope one day you get the wish that you truly want in your heart! Keep Writing!

It Comes From The Heart at 2007-08-23

Awwww thts a relli cute poem=] x
its so goos:D xxx


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