Comments - Hanging By A Moment

XoX The Forbidden Smile oXo ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-05

Etched in her mind was the memory of his face
When she'd hurried away as if running a race
The hurt and confusion in his eyes was so clear
How could she have hurt someone so dear



this was deffinatly the heart breaker right there. it was amazing and it drew me into loving this poem like no tomorow ! it was deffinatly worth the read. :-) good work dear

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-15

Whole poem is greatly written, you created very vivid imagery and expressed emotions through the whole piece in a good way.
You also did great job with rhymes, the flow is excellent from the beginning to the end.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Krzysztof J ( F P C ) at 2007-10-26

Again Gem wow, thease days i'll i ever seem to do is hang on a moment, we'll see how things go, as for your poem my dear Gem, 5/5 and thank you so much for your honesty on mine, its what ive been thinking for a long time but the heart is always the last to know, thank :))

smiles for alex ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-01

Again another poem going into my favourites, it's great to see someone with great talent like to to create all kind of love poems that really mean something. Nice job xxx alex xxx

Whisper ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-15

Your poetry is so amazing. And this is definately one of my favorites. Poets like you make poets like me aspire to be so much greater. I loved this poem in its entirety.

"A hurricane of questions, overwhelms her brain
Yet it only took one to drive her insane"

That's my favorite. The whole poem was very heartfelt and beautiful though. No doubt.
=)
~Casey Jillian

LittleMsPink ( F P C D ) at 2012-10-03

Awwe...
made me smile
good job ^-^


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