Comments - To My Unborn Child...

kayla at 2005-09-02

WOW, this poem is really breath taking, i really loved it, u inspire me keep doin what u doin! ur the best iv seen so far.
ps/ if u have time would u please read and comment on mine it would mean a lot coming from a person that is sooo good at what u do. keep livin it up!
~*Kayla*~
aka
~*Baby-Face*~

Marta at 2005-09-03

Oh my god this poem touched me, i had a tear coming down my eye, you are very talented~ much love

Hard2Heal ( F C ) at 2005-09-03

Im speachless.. its amazing

sara ( P ) at 2005-09-04

Awesome poem, good messages in there and way to put it out on the paper, i loved it and am looking forward to see your other work.

matt white ( F P C ) at 2005-09-05

That was...wow i loved it very deep and congradualtions on a kid hope it makes you very happy

~*angel_tears~* ( C ) at 2005-09-05

Your poems just get better and better!!great poem

Misty at 2005-09-19

I got goosebumps n tearz in my eyez!!!! That was the SWEETEST poem I have ever read...You're VERY talented!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!

~1~

Misty

Taylor Renee at 2005-09-20

Wow...that's just..awsome! there is no perfect word to describe that poem, im sry. That was prolly one of the best ive ever read, alot better than mine will ever be atleast! lol

Taylor Renee at 2005-09-20

Wow...that's just..awsome! there is no perfect word to describe that poem, im sry. That was prolly one of the best ive ever read, alot better than mine will ever be atleast! lol

Bambee at 2005-09-25

AWW....GREAT PEOM!!! i LOVE IT!!! 5 OUT OF 5 FROM ME!! *APPLAUSE*

Crystal Aaron ( F ) at 2005-09-25

This is an amazing poem. I really liked it. It is so sweet and loving. Your son should always look up to you after that. Keep up the good work. It is amazing to see a father love his child that much before he ever lays eyes on him. You will make a great daddy.

Bambee at 2005-09-30

Three thumbs up!!!-if it's possibleLOL amazing i loved it soo much i added u to my favorites list so i won't forget u!
*hand claps*

Ashton at 2005-10-01

This made me cry.... Great Poem, you are an amazing writer. Keep it up!

xia thao at 2005-10-04

Your poem is so sad it almost made me cry....but i love it its so good....

Anne at 2005-10-09

Your son is going to be one blessed kid! My best wishes to your family

Patricia at 2005-10-10

Wow...dats really gewwwd. Its funny because fathers do feel like this to their son. They'll always be proud no matter what. This poem shows that a REAL father will always be by their son's side thru gewd times and bad. REALLY REALLY GEWWD.

dancer_chick ( F ) at 2005-10-10

Awesome poem. That is really something to write a poem about that.
Most guys wouldn't do that. Your wife is lucky. Good luck with your son, I wish your family a great life.

Angel Garcia at 2005-10-11

Hey matthew i really liked your poem. i know what it feels like waiting for your child. i couldnt wait for my son to come either! GREAT JOB!

~*Unloved Forever*~ ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-18

THAT IS THE GREATEST POEM!!!! OMG! gr8 job!!! that is so sweet...i hope ur son ends up actin how u said...but he should. good luck to you both!
~erika~

txma09 ( P C ) at 2005-10-24

I thought that your poem was good. Im gonna read some more of your poems and vote and comment on them. But one ? do you havea child.


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