Comments - To My Unborn Child...

Daddys Girl ( F P C ) at 2007-01-11

Wow. I must say- you sure do have a way with words. In both of your poems that I have read so far, my jaw has dropped and I've just ben in awe! You're so talented. You really are. Great job. Amazing poem. 5/5 no doubt!

Barry... ( F C ) at 2007-01-14

Absolutely blown away!!
This is beautifully worded.....
and is special so is my son Matthew!!!

Off the chart! Brill.....


Hurt^♥^ ( F C D ) at 2007-01-14

I loved this!! It's fabulous!

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

This is such a great poem... amazing!5/5

kylah at 2007-02-23

Wow!! that was really sweet of u to do that for your son if its true!! if it is i hope u enjoy having a son.
~kylah~

ONE ♥ at 2007-04-04

0OK THiS iS T0O SWEET && T0O G0OD...H0W D0 U D0 iT...I WANNA HEAR M0RE...I L0VE THE ADViCE && I AGREE 0N EVERYTHiN U SAY..DAMN UR W0MAN iS LUCKY T0 HAVE Y0U!! ♥

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-06

Excellent poem i really enjoyed it, nice words, nice style and a very strong but touching ending, good job.

Katrina at 2007-04-25

I am really happy for you, I am having a son tooo, and this poem really made me think about the importance of life!! you have a gift, and I like that!! well congratulations on your son, and to your girl as well, I hope the best for you 2.

Michelle ( F C D ) at 2007-05-30

Excellent poem! love it! 5/5!

i just found out i'm pregnant. i'm a first timer and nervous as hell. please pray for my child and i.

if a girl, we plan on naming her Makaela Ann Cleveland.. if a boy, Matthew Cleveland. we aren't sure on a middle name for the boy yet. :)

Michelle

shelley at 2007-06-07

Hey all ur stuff is amazing, ive really enjoyed reading them ... keep up the good work =D x

michelle ( C ) at 2007-06-14

Do u understand how amazing this poem is, i felt so touched and its not even to me, you definetly have such talent and inspiration
5/5
check out some of mine

Jessica B ( D ) at 2007-06-19

Thats so cute.
Truely beautiful.

alka mendiratta ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-14

All the fathers to be and fathers should go through this beautiful piece of work.great job.

Esther ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-10

Aww..lots of people obviously like your poem

Marina ( F P C ) at 2007-08-13

This is such an exrodinary poem!!! such feeling!! and what good words of wisdom i must say, if its true.. you will make a wonderful father!!! congratuialtions... i've written a few peoms about my son aswell... your welcome to read them.. my favorite one is tittled "my unborn son." this is just an amaizeing way to express.. don't stop writeing!!!
5/5
-Marina

oksana at 2007-09-02

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3

LucklessJack at 2007-09-27

This is a great poem ^^.

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01

Nice poem! Love It!!

Kawena at 2007-12-27

I Love it cause i'm about to have a baby boy in march and this is some very good advice for him to know even though i don't think hell understand until he gets older lol. but definetly a 5!!!!!!

shantavia ( F P C ) at 2008-01-05

This is a wondeer touching most beautiful poem i had every read well done


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