Comments - I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO

Chaye ( F P D ) at 2008-04-14

This poems is extremly good and I love it. It reminds me of what I am going through right now. Thank you for sharing it.

Lisa ( F C ) at 2008-04-15

I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM!!!

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-24

This is just another angle of seeing love or a different view towards life. Very enjoyable to read. Your points are strong in itself. Nice poem. Keep writing.

Ash ( F P C ) at 2008-04-26

I love the ideas behind this poem. The hardest part of love is learning to let go. The last stanza is simply amazing - I really loved every line and every word of this poem. It deserves 100/5!

waiting for him ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-26

I think i read this before, but it was really good. i like the way u said 'to let go' over and over. it had a nice effect!
Aly

waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-27

Aww dear so touching and heartful poem. wonderful feelings you have put in this poem. am sure it hurts to leave the one that you love most.

my favorite part was the last:

"To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires,
but to take each day as it comes,
and to cherish the moment.
Is not to criticize or regulate anyone,
but to try to become whatever dream I can be.

To Let Go....Is not to regret the past,
but to grow and live for the future.
Is to fear less and to love more.

And I do "LOVE YOU"

So I will..."LET YOU GO"...

jan the Depressed Devil ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-27

Another simple poem but i like the message in it... i can really relate to this.. i think everyone has lost someone so important in their lives... and the way u portrayed ur msg was telling us that even tho we lost them... life still continues... nice =D

SensesCaptureLace ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-28

Intersting, sad, and very captivating for what was written.
I think in the last lines you should not have quotation marks around the words.
Also, I do not like how the title is in all caps. Just my opinion.
Overall, a very moving piece
5/5

Also, the thread you commented on mine was closed, but I made it a ONE for ONE deal. I've already commented on the other poem before now.

Take care
~Lace

shawn hoskins ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-30

ANOTHER GREAT POEM CAN RELATE TO THIS ONE AS WELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK YOUR VERY GOOD

Miu ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-30

The beginning was so powerful. Loved that part, also, liked the repetition, taking the whole poem to new level. The poem really is about so natural that people doesn't tend to notice or will understand wrongly.
Very meaningful piece 5/5

Katlynn ( C D ) at 2008-04-30

Another amazing poem. I really liked this one how you had the different ways of to let go, there is always all certain ways of letting go just not one reason, and i really liked how you did this. :)

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

BangAndWeAllDied ( F C D ) at 2008-05-01

So true. I think practically everyone can relate to this poem at one point or another. The flow was right on and the whole thing was just.. awesome. 5/5 from me.

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-03

This poem reflects a rare love few are capable of

H8tWaTiLuV ( C D ) at 2008-05-03

Wow! and amazing poem to read. I really loved it... I know what you mean by letting go... Letting go can hurt but it's also a good thing and you explained as in a good way... A very amazing poem written indeed....keep up the good work...5/5

Jenn ( F P C ) at 2008-05-03

I think the repetition here ("To Let Go...") is very effective. It's wonderful that you have all of these philosophies on love and letting go and you can share them in one poem. It shows your depth of thoughts and feelings. One suggestion: in the first stanza, you wrote,
"It's not to cut myself off,
It's the realization that I can't control another."

In all the other stanzas, you said "Is" instead of "It's" .. maybe you could change the first stanza to,

"Is not to cut myself off,
Is the realization that I can't control another."

I hope this was clear enough.
Thank you for sharing!

shadowknight ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-04

....
why do your poems make me cry?
It so beautiful and heartfelt!
The first stanza just blows be away, and i couldnt speak 10 minutes after i read it!
Its so wonderful!!

Great Job!

5/5

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-05-04

I loved your ending because it was filled with an immense amount of meaning and power .. it just left me with a BANG. I could tell the emotions expressed here came straight from you heart because they felt so real while reading this piece. Well done *5/5*

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-05

I liked the reputition of "To Let Go" it really held the poem together and gave it a deeper meaning as well as feeling. The flow of the poem was just ok for me, it could of been better, however; the overall structure was great.

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To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring,
it means I can't do it for someone else.
Is not to cut myself off,
Is the realization that I can't control another.

^^A nice begining to the rest of the poem, gets the readers mood in the right spot to continue reading.

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To Let Go....Is not to enable,
but to allow learning from natural consequences.
Is to admit powerlessness,
which means the outcome is not in my hands.

^^I really like this stanza, it really stood out to me for the simple fact that it is so true in many ways.

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To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another,
I can only change myself.
Is not to care for,
but to care about.

^^Very vaild point you pointed out there, I hope many will read and fully understand the meaning behind this poem for it gives great insight about letting go.

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To let Go....Is not to fix,
but to be supportive.
Is not to judge,
but to allow another to be a human being.

^^I feel like I keep saying the samething over and over, but I can't help it. This stanza shows the reader just how important it is to realize that one' has to let go and stop thinking of their selves all the time.

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To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome,
but to allow others to effect their own outcomes.
Is not to be protective,
it is to permit another to face reality.

^^Sometimes facing reality is hard to do, and by reading this stanza, one' can fully visualize and hopefully understand that the outcomes of not facing reality.

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To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept.
Is not to nag, scold, or argue,
but to search out my own
shortcomings and to correct them.

^^Correction, is a must in many cases. Correcting yourself is one of the best tools one' can ever follow through with; by doing that hopefully the person will learn, and I always say, learning is the way to knowledge.

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To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires,
but to take each day as it comes,
and to cherish the moment.
Is not to criticize or regulate anyone,
but to try to become whatever dream I can be.

^^Oh this stanza reminds me of something I wrote a while back, and it is so true in so many perspectives. I'm a simple kind of man and I take life as it comes, I'm in no kind of rush, I just like to relax. Why can't a majority of the people these days understand relaxation?

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To Let Go....Is not to regret the past,
but to grow and live for the future.
Is to fear less and to love more.

^^Oh I liked this stanza, it shows such truth and many should follow what you are saying in this poem.

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And I do "LOVE YOU"

^^And I love you too...lol Really this is a nice little touch towards the end of the poem.

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So I will..."LET YOU GO"...

^^Great ending, shows that you care towards the other person enough to let them live their life the true way that they want.

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Nice write, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

MILESTONE at 2008-05-21

Finest.
i dont even have something constuctive to offer.
just praises .

well done
5/5

bRoKen mIrrOr fAllen PeTals ( F D ) at 2008-05-31

Wow..

to let go
is a hard thing you know
that even you don't like it
you need to leave and forget about it

to let go
is a painful goodbye
and a thing with many reasons why
and as I watch you go
the tears are starting to show!

~a short poem to comment on your wonderful poem...

5/5


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