Comments - Your Everything

Mary ( F C ) at 2008-12-26

WOW great poem...........It was really cute and i loved it because i can relly relate to it.......its definitley goin in my favs.....5/5

Valedico ( F C D ) at 2009-03-17

I loved the flow in this poem, it was really nice. Well written and hearfelt. Don't think ONE needs to be capitalised. I think the second to last stanza is a bit self centered and I don't particularly like it. You could rearrange it to say you'd be the one for him but to suggest perfection isn't the right way to go about it. A good write in all. Really admired the flow, well done.


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