Comments - Love is where you are... !

elizabeth ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

That was tender and sweet!
it had the innocent ring of a first love, very nice!

Good Writing!
beth

XxTeArSxX17 ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

Amazing job keep up the lovely work. i enjoyed reading both of your poems.

•°-Renee™-°• ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

This was beautiful, I love how all the little things remind you so much of the one you love, and I like how you incoporated this into your poem. You're structure is persistant also, and it's a very easy read. Great job with this hun.

Take Care,
Renee

purple fears ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-03

The flow is perfect. Easy to read, amazing. Loved it. Great work
Sarah x

Felicia Corso ( F C D ) at 2005-10-03

It was a beautiful poem! GRAT JOB!

*Edwin* ( F ) at 2005-10-03

Another good 1 lol dayum ur stuff sounds better then mine...lol...im hatin now lol jp

◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D ) at 2005-10-04

Nicely done my dear. I'd appreciated it more if you had put spaced between a couple of lines, that'll make it more easy to read. I enjoyed it.

Mt favourite lines were:

"Whenever there's a helping hand,
or a word of encouragement,
whenever there are cheerful thoughts,
or hope thats Heaven-sent,"

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

andrea ( F C D ) at 2005-10-05

Aww i love it. its soooooo cute.

Esmeralda at 2005-10-05

Beautifully written poem i loved it i wish i could become a better writer just like you! if you can check out some of my stuff!

rainfairy ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-06

Sweet...can't think of anything...just sweeeeeeeeeeeeet............

ImMeltingInUrEyes at 2005-10-06

Awsome write 5/5

~*Known_as~Noni ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-06

I think I read this one too but never voted on it. Nice job. not my usual style

Why Me? ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-07

.....Wow that was absolutly a wonderful poem.

Wheres your boy tonight? ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-10

Wonderful poem dear, Think I have commented before. =D Doesn't matter nor hurt to comment more then once. =D

Loving_A_Lie† ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-10

Gerat poem. I like the way it flows and everything ^_^

~Anthony

Britney ( F C D ) at 2005-10-11

Wow ameila I absolutley loved this poem u put into words what soo many people have no idea how to say. I absolutely loved this poem.. it had a certain romantic quality about it that jus tingles your heart when you read it. Your an awesome poet and I cannot wait to read more. your are def. on my favorites!. 5/5!

ItalianStallion Loves Miss Ashle ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-11

Wow awsome poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

NothingBrokenButMyHeart ( F C D ) at 2005-10-12

Awww.. that was so cute and touching.. i love ur words, ur rhyme, and evrything about this poem here.. amazingly beautiful
keep up the gud work
Nannoush

1Loveachother ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-13

Awww, that is such a sweet poem! I loved the flow and it was so well-written! Great job, keep up the GREAT work!
Love always,
~BJ~

Niki//Saiya ( C ) at 2005-10-14

5/5, great job! I love your writing, keep it up. =)


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