Comments - What I've Kept Inside

LaShunda at 2006-03-07

I thought this was a beautifully written poem. It was something I could relate to.

dion ( F P ) at 2006-03-07

Heyy i love your poem, i also lost a person i loved, and i am now whatching her love that other person more. its hard to see

Spongebob Lover ( F P C ) at 2006-03-07

Its not sucky its really good 5/5

Nitin Mongia ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-07

445 votes with 4.5 as rating, do u still think that this poem of ur sucks...i am sure not now...lol

i must say, though the theme was sad but u just xpressed ur feelings in the best possible manner..amazing poem.

take care/stay strong and all the best

justalone ( F P C ) at 2006-03-07

Ah tinydancer, i know exactly how you feel. so many times i have been in your place. the pain, the fear, the tears. they all just flow out from our hearts into our pens and into a piece of paper. a wonderful soul-stirring piece of poetry. loving and sad.

kayla at 2006-03-07

You really good at writing poems it didnt suck at all it was really good....5/5


later
Kayla

Bertha ( F C ) at 2006-03-07

It doesnt suck! :)

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-07

This is a pretty cool poem. It doesn't suck at all. Lol, you have a lot of fans. You must be popular + you are talented. That means you are uber cool. Ohhh man.. I'm so lucky to be commenting.. and ohhh man you are in my group. That's so awesome! lol take care :)

4_goten_&_alone** ( F C ) at 2006-03-07

Weve ALL been there hun! dont worry! when ever you wanna talk just personal message me! im totally up for it! in fact! your helping me with all of you wonderful poems...i know were your coming from. i feel the same way right now....

4_goten_&_alone** ( F C ) at 2006-03-07

Weve ALL been there hun! dont worry! when ever you wanna talk just personal message me! im totally up for it! in fact! your helping me with all of you wonderful poems...i know were your coming from. i feel the same way right now....

яazor cυt κιѕs℮z* ( F C D ) at 2006-03-09

Aw That poem doesn't suck! Its simple but really heart-felt. I absoloutly loved it. Im sure a million others out there can relate. 5/5
Keep up the good writing.
Bec xx

tyme2change at 2006-03-09

This poem describes exactly what ive been feeling about this one guy lately...its like part 2 of my 'keeping me sane' poem! keep up the writing your awsome!

Farid at 2006-03-25

Hey, that was pretty good ,
nice job !!
i hope u get all ur wishes!!

CaffeineBomb ( P ) at 2006-04-01

Hey there, you commented on one of my poems a few months ago, and here's my finally coming to have a look at yours in return... I really like this one, it doesn't use any fancy language or try and be too clever, it's just honest and from the heart. I love it!

Stephen ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-01

This poem is really wonderful, yeah I can relate to this too happen to me a few times

Just Wishes ( F C ) at 2006-04-05

So simple and pure. reminded me of my poem" she invaded my palace".all the best.

TYNDA at 2006-04-07

Are u kidding me this does NOT suck! its good too! lol
-tynda

AloVeLiFeHuRtS(Jayma) ( F P C ) at 2006-04-11

Every time i read this it makes me cry

AloVeLiFeHuRtS(Jayma) ( F P C ) at 2006-04-11

I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

obsessedgurl ( F C D ) at 2006-04-26

Aww that is so sad!!!


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