Comments - To See Your Beautiful Smile

Broken Fallen Angel ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-16

Awwwwwwww......thts really sweet......a 5/5 for me keep it up!!

Bhavingr8 ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-18

Dear Goran,

you have taken yourself to a higher level through this poem. i am happy to choose u as one of my favourite poets. wanna hear more from u. i think v both have something in common. u can read my poem WORDS and then ADDICTED to find it out. take care.

¦●→sammycakes←●¦ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-22

Short and sweet lol.

Nothing much to say really...flow was good, lines were about the same length and rhyming scheme and rhymes were chosen well. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Krissey ( F C D ) at 2006-08-22

To see your beautiful smile,
I will cross a border.
I will fly like a bird,
As it is my heart's order.

I loved the rhymes in this stanza...not yor ordinary rhyme thats for sure! I really thought this was a beautiful poem! Great Job!
-Krissey

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-23

A very nice package..this short and sweet poem

Poptart ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-28

Wow Goran you wrote yet again another lovely poem. It was beautiful.

Noni Wang© ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-30

Great job, very sweet poem. I'd like to see more imagery, flowery words and descriptions. Keep it up

Lush.Fcuk-* ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-02

Awe, that was so cute. You really conveyed your emotions in this piece...good job. 5/5 =D

Lisa ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-04

I really liked this poem, You did a great job with it!
Sorry to say it made me sad, but that could just be because I'm jealous of the girl with the beautiful smile. haha

Natalie ღ ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-07

No matter what the world say.

^^Maybe you should re-word that line. It could work better if you added 'would' or 'will' after world.

Otherthan that, I thought it was a good poem. A little short, but it got to the point! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

King Of Elements and Other Stuff ( F P C ) at 2006-09-09

Awsome i get what u mean ur great writer!

=]

donna ( F C D ) at 2006-09-09

'I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world says.'

I love how You ended this poem.. It shows just how strongly You feel about the person You are writing this for.. well done 5/5 xx

жshadowspoetж ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-09

Goran, lovely poem you penned here, though short but well express emotions....

In the ocean of love, Everyone is a voyager, Traveling to the island of romance, On a vessel that would never collapse. Everyone flows with the rhythm of life, Burning sensation felt in the heart, Will guarantee eternal sweet delight.


Broken Fallen Angel ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-10

Awwww........this poem makes me smile..idk y....but ur such a awsome poet!! a another 5/5 for me

Bitt3rSw33t ( C D ) at 2006-09-12

Very well written...flowed beautifully...

*~*~*Crystal Dreams*~*~* ( F C ) at 2006-09-13

Loved the ending yaar...very nice very sweet....5/5

misstress ( F C D ) at 2006-09-16

Ahhh.. this was a good read in deed..
could be one of your best.
5/5

Esther ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-17

This poem is beautifully written!

julia at 2006-10-20

Your polem is really really goood!
you should write heaps.... your a pro!!

Scrittore ( P C ) at 2006-12-18

Awesome!!


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