Comments - The Luckiest Guy (part 2)

Karma Hope ( C ) at 2006-10-14

At first I took a glance and normally I dont read poems that i think will be long, but i started to read the first few lines and it really pulled me in, kept me interested from those first few lines to the end. So yeah *5/5* effort.. Well done.

Olivia ( F P C ) at 2006-10-15

That's really good.
And sad.
I like it a lot.
I can relate and it had a lot of depth.
Kepp it up!

disturbed one ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

Wow...i liked this one better then part one...its pretty good 5/5

© ღ ♥°Sweet Surrender°♥ ( F P ) at 2006-11-09

I really liked this one its cool how you like made a sequel to the first part of this poem! ^-^

Fire-lilly ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-22

I love this poem it goes right with part one. It is easy to understand and has a wonderful flow to it. Keep up the good work and I hope to see even more of your wonderful work in the future.

Layla at 2006-11-25

Aww, that's so sad, excellent poem, so heartfelt.

~if only he knew~ ( F P C ) at 2006-11-29

Well i like this again man it is so sweet i like the way you write.5/5

katie at 2006-12-03

I really like ur poem keep up the good work!!!!

George at 2006-12-08

Yet another great poem that captures the same feelings I still have only in a different context.

Alyson ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-16

This one was better and the rhyming wasn't as stressed. It flowed well, and again, it was sweet. *5/5*

Alyson

anna ( D ) at 2006-12-21

Thanks for the comment and i have new poems up that i have just reasently put up plez check them out

thanks



your not bad your self

~anna~

¤Kitty¤ ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-22

Thats really good. 5/5. however i was wondering.
"You can smile all the time
As you have much happiness
I got use to teardrops
Yet for her, it is meaningless."

should it be yet TO her, it is meaningless?

southernღcharm ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-28

Another great write.
I love your poems so much.
YOu have just an amazing heart and mind that really knows how to express itself. Keep up the great work and thank youf or commenting mypoems.
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

Tainted Beauty* ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-03

I liked this, not as much as the first one, but it was still good. One thing I noticed though, was that your rhymes seem a little forced in some places. Other than that it was great, you have a really good idea with this poem. My favorite stanza was:

"I had the deepest feelings
Yet never she could see
Can you do me a favor?
Advise her not to hate me"

It was so heart filled, and it was as if you were pleading with her, and the reader could really capture that, great work, I loved it.

--Steph

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

I liked this one just as much as the first one.good job. your really talented

in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C ) at 2007-02-28

Aww these keep gettin beta and beta

much love and many kisses,
bex

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

OoOoO...I loved this one...It's very sadd!! I think you did an amzing job on wording...They were really good and seemed to fit nice job!! 5/5

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-18

Wow this was even better than the first one. Ever line had me hooked and just wondering how it would end up. Thanx for continuing this series. Its amazing.

Erin ( F P C ) at 2007-05-08

Its getting better n better ... great job going to read the next one:D

love erin

Delie ( C D ) at 2007-05-19

You are really tough aswell.
and i absolutely adore these poems...:D
i love how all you want is to see her happy (in first) and now that you just don't want her to hate you.
just one thing. any girl would be lucky to have you. :)
i feel like writing a poem for you. iunno :)


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