Comments - Hand in Hand

breeanna at 2007-08-06

Well done

playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Good poem

Brittney ( F C D ) at 2007-08-11

'As we sit in the snow white sand,
And the waves crash upon the shore,
I stare to the sky trying to understand,
Why the stars seem brighter then ever before.'

'We laugh, we kiss, we talk,
Draw pictures in the sand.
Along the ocean we walk,
Just her and I, Hand in Hand.'

those are my favorite stanzas. I couldn't pick just one. they both have a lot of meaning in them. At least to me. Really the whole poem did but to me those were the best parts. This is an amazing poem! Great write. The imagery was amazing.
5/5
*Brittney

Me at 2007-08-31

This poem is a glimpse of what some of your readers wish would be a past memory of a love once known.

MaryAnne Skora ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-07

It is so sweet, I love it! Please, keep it up!

From MaryAnne Skora

Im Not Emo 911 ( F P C ) at 2007-10-09

I LOVE IT! You really can see whats happening and the love between whoever is meant about in this poem! Love your work, keep it up!

5/5

Trying To Love Is The Hardest Th ( F D ) at 2007-11-03

Awsome! keep writing!

5/5

Melissa.

Sara at 2007-11-04

This poem is beautiful. i loved it! good work!
5/5 =]

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

What a lovely piece of work, brim full of feeling and emotion!

Well done! Neil.

Christina at 2008-02-26

Wow i love this poem its so sweet

Bernice at 2008-04-26

JEEZ!!this is an AMAZING poem.i fell in love with i.ure an extremely gifted poet.

applelin at 2008-05-06

What a beautiful image you described!

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2008-05-07

Brilliant poem 5*

poeticbeauty93 at 2008-05-26

Thats sooooo good! i love the rhyme scheme and the soft easy rhyme it creates and the image you create with the beach and the rhyme scheme is steady as to make the sound of your feet sinking in the sand!

jordan at 2008-07-07

That is BEAUTIFUL! have u really felt that way before?

mia ( P ) at 2008-10-24

Am totally speechlesssss !! this is an outstanding poem realllly I LUV ITTTTTTT :D
keeeep the gooood work up ;)

Chelsey ( F P C D ) at 2010-02-18

This was simply adorable! being hand in hand is so romantic especially on the beach, that it makes me want the moment to last forever, and I haven't even experienced it yet. .I just mean for others too...seeing couples in love under stars, in each others arms is so priceless to me...as was this poem! I loved it!!

Ric Hansen at 2010-09-18

It is splendid! Love comes to us like an eggshell; fragile and easily broken.

Ric Hansen at 2010-09-18

It is splendid! Love comes to us like an eggshell; fragile and easily broken.


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