Comments - Picture in a Frame

Tom Swart ( F P C ) at 2007-01-23

Very nice write and I can see the images now of your grandmother. She was lucky to have you in her life..keep up the good writes

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-04

Wow blown away again by your excellent writing! I loved it! your great! 5/5 for sure!
*kaila*

becca ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-14

COMMENT # 4

aww.. this is soo sad.. a clearly a very heartfelt poem.. this piece is FILLED with emotion and breathes poetry.. the words here are just perfect..definitly my favorite so far.. and im soo sorry for your loss

in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C ) at 2007-02-28

I try not to let the grief, just overcome my day,
I'll blow a kiss to heaven and send it when I pray.
I'll ask God to free me now, from a world so blue,
To take me up to Paradise, so I can fly with you.

these lines made me cry, this poem was so lovely. thank you so much!!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-04-08

How did i miss this!!! awesome.....
you write like someone I know!!

wheezie7489 ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

AWWWW

anne at 2007-04-22

I like it good peace...
:) i mean piece!

Melissa Chavez at 2007-04-24

OMG THAT WAS SOO PRETTY THAT I STARTED TO CRY!!!MY GRANDMA PASSED AWAY WHEN I WAS A Lil' GIRL TO, SO I KNOW WHATS IT LIKE TO LOSE SOMEONE YOU LOVE!!!BUT I GOT TO TELL YOU THAT POEMS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

snowy ( F C D ) at 2007-04-29

Beautifully sad, I mean this poem brings tears out, and I can relate I just lost my grandma 2 years ago and I miss her everyday. Another thing God is never to blame for suffering that belongs to only 1 god Satan the devil. I hope you feel better, and I know that you will never heal because I haven't........Xxxcellent Poem

I also have a poem I make for my grandma, It's call Bleeding Tears, you welcome to check it out.

Angie at 2007-06-11

Wow that was really pretty.

Brittney ( F C D ) at 2007-06-21

Wow. this is so amazing. One of the best I have read on the site. The rhythm was perfect and it was all from the heart. I love it.
Keep up the good work!
*Brittney

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2007-07-18

This is one hell of a poem, i like to no wer poets get their inspiration from and i think u reflected it phenominally. uterly wounderful work, u couldnt ask for a sweeter poem. =]

yoyi at 2007-08-10

Wow i love this poe im sorry about your grandma im sure she would be proud of u if she reads this poem !!!

natasha at 2007-08-21

Nice work on the poem gal its so sad but sweet.....
!tash!

lee at 2007-09-15

This is the best poem i have ever read it is Excellent

Isabelle at 2007-10-15

That was something else, that was so good. Doy uo ever look in the Thesauraus? Well i loved it! Keep up the good work!

Tammy ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-18

Absolutely Beautiful!!! Wonderful job on this one.

Teen>Love>Tragedy ( F C D ) at 2007-12-16

I really loved this poem, there's just so much emotion its amazing. well done
Teen>Love>Tragedy

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

The background history to this piece is invaluable in trying to get the best out of this wonderful piece! Well done! Neil.

Sarah ( F P C ) at 2008-02-10

Such beauty, such compassion, such elegance, such simplicity, such emotion, such talent all rolled into one
fantastic poem
keep them going :)
peace, love and wonder,
Sarah -xo


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