Comments - I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO

ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-04

Letting go is the hardest thing to do most especially if you feel like you're so attached to that person and so most of us prefer to stay and endure the pain.. but this piece is different and i admire the content of it, on how you inspire the people to give up if they think things won't work that well anymore.. you wrote it with great devotion.

BECCA lessTHANthree ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-15

Wow.. this is an AMAAAZZZING poem.. i love the repeated phrase, it really adds a lot of impact. the flow is once again perfect and the ending is great.

the format is a bit tricky because of the unevenly sized stanzas, also the last part of the poem, you don't have to capitalize it, its strong enough in its self


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