Comments - The Last Poem She Wrote

adrienne ( P ) at 2005-05-04

this poem is exellent. it made me think of a relationship i was once in.

adrienne ( P ) at 2005-05-04

this poem is exellent. it made me think of a relationship i was once in.

amanda ( F ) at 2005-05-04

this is a really good poem hunn!!! I like it a lot... I think I might just put it on my journal...good job hunn 5/5

Handiarta Leo at 2005-05-04

Good job, two thumbs up for you. I read it twice and I want to read it again and again and again then I share this poem to my friend.

Leanne at 2005-05-04

very good,and very sad

hannah at 2005-05-04

ummm....its actually pretty good. some of ur rhymes suck ,though. it has a really powerful message!

emily at 2005-05-04

one word for it "WOW" keep up the good work

ULcheerleader at 2005-05-05

I Loved it...it was really long but it was wonderful...i really liked...
Good Job! ! :)

ULcheerleader at 2005-05-05

It was EXCELLENT i loved it..Wonderful Job! ! !

Dorith at 2005-05-05

great poem! i just loved it, its very touching! hope to read some more of your poems if theyre all as good as this one (no doubt about it, your blessed!)

and as comment on this: Amy Roullier ( P C ) at 2005-05-04

THis is a really really good poem. very nice job 5/5. Though I hope you realisse that when u comit sucide u will not go to heaven.,,,i notices that u said that you wrote about the girl being in heavan with god, but when you comit sucide its one sin that cant be forgiven, casue for one how can u ask for forgiveness if ur dead...But I really did like the poem, its sad byt well written

*how do you know so sure that you wont go to heaven?* nonsense!!!

loves

cheyenne at 2005-05-05

that was awesome. so true. was this a real life expeirience? i'm sure it was. thanx for the great reading. one of the best i've ever read. love liz and cheychey

Shannon Ardiles at 2005-05-05

Hey, Im kind of new to this site, but i your poem wants to make me some back again and again...It was so moving and touching with a great lesson behind it all. I loved it, and keep up the good work!!!!!!

katie at 2005-05-05

wow that is an amazing poem... its very inspirational.. the second i read that poem i had tears in my eyes... its awsome.. i hope this didnt really happen to someone uyu kno..well keep up the really good poems =kt

katie at 2005-05-05

wow htat is very inspirational and sad i loved it keep up the good work

Brooke ( F C D ) at 2005-05-05

Amit that was beautiful but so sad! You're the love poem King! Another amazing piece of work. Your poems are always so very well written. Keep it up I always look forward to reading your poems. I have finally posted a new ones if you want to read it! Take Care~ Brooke

ღstephaleeღ ( F P C ) at 2005-05-05

omg this is SO INCREADIBLY GOOD

*~*FaerieTears*~* at 2005-05-05

this is an absolutely beautiful poem! sad, but beautiful nonetheless. nice work with the rhyming. i am not a rhymer, so to do that with that long of a poem is very adrmirable, in my eyes. it made me want to cry, so i hope that was the emotion you wished to evoke. some advice... take the part in the title about it being long out!! you dont need it! and also, there is a typo where you say "every word of promise I said, was cent percent true." i think you mean one hundred percent! anyway, good luck with future pieces!

Always,
FaerieT

*~*FaerieTears*~* at 2005-05-05

oh, and a ps and an afterthought.... u really made me think about some of the choices i have made.... so i just wanted to thank you and if u get a chance, plz go read some of my poems. i hate advertising like this, but i would love to hear from someone as talented as you and see what you think. thanx a bunch!

Always,
FaerieT

*fallen*angel* at 2005-05-05

i think this is really good but i also think that the rhymes were a little forced. but overall, i liked it.

amy

*~*FaerieTears*~* at 2005-05-05

oh, and a ps and an afterthought.... u really made me think about some of the choices i have made.... so i just wanted to thank you and if u get a chance, plz go read some of my poems. i hate advertising like this, but i would love to hear from someone as talented as you and see what you think. thanx a bunch!

Always,
FaerieT


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