Comments - Love is where you are... !

fallentears ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-14

This is such a sweet poem. Keep it up xxxx

KaKaKatlynn ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-16

I really liked this one. very cute and very sweet. i love it. keep it up. keep on writing. amazing job you have done here. love always and forever.

Tawny at 2005-10-27

Great job. i loved it

gorgeouslilmissy ( F C D ) at 2005-10-31

Fantastic x

Manipulated Child ( F D ) at 2005-11-06

"whenever there's someone glad
to walk with you a mile..."

That just got me to smile. I mean whenever I see my parents fight, they'll still go walking around the park together. And I'm happy for them.

fallen angel ( F C D ) at 2005-11-06

I really loved the flow of this poem and the way the rhythem was kept steady all the way through. keep writing.

ღN3NA_PARA_TIღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-06

Oh my god.this is amazing i loved everyword of it i know 4 a fact that u deserve a 5/5 and thats what i gave you...keep up the great work...

Lydia O ( F C D ) at 2005-11-08

This was a very sweet and lovely poem. I really enjoyed it.

I was happy to see the helpful advice offered by Natalie84 and very glad that you apparently accepted it. I didn't see the poem previously but, judging from the comment, I know it could only have led to an improvement. I know that not all criticism is helpful but too many poets are resistant to accept any advice. I have to admire those like you who do. 5/5.

Emma ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-24

This is a really sweet poem. keep up the good work.

Emma5/5


Cari ( P C ) at 2006-01-13

Nice job, beautifully written. i love ur work. 5/5

katie at 2006-01-13

That i just about the sweetest tghing ive ever read, if u dont smile while reading this then go pack ur things im sending u off to the looney bin

Lexie ( P C D ) at 2006-01-13

Beautiful poem. I thought this was a really sweet poem. Keep writing.

midnight♥lullibys ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-13

Awww this is so freakin sweet i almost cant take it!! i love it so much you did a very good job on this poem....5/5

Tara Kay ( F C D ) at 2006-01-13

I love this poem,its really well written. keep it up.
love Tara-Kay

Sarah Drew ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-13

Awesome work, this poem had great flow and emotion.

Avery ( F C D ) at 2006-01-13

Awe, this poem is,, i guess the word is cute? It brought a smile to my face.
Great job.

David Marshall ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-26

I love this poem...but as you can see, my love life isnt so lucky...ive lived for a while now loving some one that says they love me back..but doesnt show any feeling at all, she acts like every thing i say doesnt mean a thing...she only cares about herself and i know it...but ill always have feelings for her...but i loved that poem..gives me an idea of how i might feel someday...thx for letting me read that

Megadrive ( F C D ) at 2006-03-03

This was very beautiful, I cant write love poems, so I tip my hat to u=)

David Munoz ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-16

You really have alot of talent Amelia. This poem just works. Very good. 5/5

Kaitlyn ( F C ) at 2006-05-01

This was so beautiful! aload of emotion structured into this piece. Kat


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