Comments - The words I cannot say

~PoeticMystery~ ( F C ) at 2005-10-23

I loved it. Keep it up.


..eliSa* ( F C ) at 2005-11-13

I enjoyed reading this poem becase i feel the same way about someone, the only difference is he has a girlfriend and theres nothign we can work towards..i do long for himn to hokd me and to feel his lips against mine but i knoe its nothing but a fantasy..thankyou for writing a poem that i can place myself in and relate to..well written-keep it up

kayla T ( F P C ) at 2007-01-25

This is really good ! keep it up!

What Else Can I Do ( F P C ) at 2007-11-11

Awww how cute i love this ... its very nice i love the last stanza. i hope the thing between you and him worked out. 5/5

xo kisses xo ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-28

Awwt his is really sweet && sad at the same time. wonderful rythem! great poem. 5/5

Tien at 2008-04-16

Nice peom ^_^ its the best peom i ever read xD write some more xP 10/10

xo kisses xo ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-28

Wow! i absolutely love this.
the last line was amazing!

xo kisses xo

anneblyth at 2010-04-23

Love it..! i can relate..hehe,,

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