Comments - The Luckiest Guy (part 2)

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-04

Again another very strong poem. I feel sorta attached to this poem because Im going through something similar. You have such an amazing sense of rhythm and rhyme nothing sounds outta place every word belongs

Alex ( F C D ) at 2007-06-16

I liked this one as well.

~*Alex*~

Luzan and Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-21

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

Emily E Mehigan at 2007-09-25

Wow....I love part 2 also. Great job. <3

Valerie ( F ) at 2007-11-03

Wow I love this. Amazing ... and it really gave me some thought there :). One of the best poem I've read.

Crystal ( F P ) at 2008-06-02

That's such a sweet poem i feel sorry for the less fortunate guy he sounds sweet...

mandy ( F C D ) at 2009-03-18

It was very clever and sweet. Somewhere in the middle I lost the flow of the poem, but the rest was very well written. I enjoyed the simplicity of your words; making it easy to follow what you’re trying to tell the readers. But I also liked the meaning behind each word that you wrote, nicely done. 5/5
-mandy :)

Waina Honey at 2015-01-12

Reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. This poem makes me want to get back with him.. OH NO!


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