Comments - Silently

Hard2Heal ( F C ) at 2005-09-03

That poem gave me chills.. you are such a good writer. i admire you

dani, Click HERE at 2005-09-05

Wow.,. i read all your poems that you have posted and i really like them all.. i can relate to someof them in various ways witch is strange.. anyways keep up the good work..
Dani

*Pure_Angel* ( F ) at 2005-09-14

Wow. i know your probly sick of my comments but wow i cant stop reading all your stuff. i find that they are all great and i was wondering if they come from your experiences or from your mind?.

brittany at 2005-11-10

The wonderful work of love...

lilia ( F P C ) at 2005-12-10

Very beautiful, and touching loved it from the bottem of my heart. please id you get a chance can you check out my poems. thanks alot bye

reaching out ( F P C ) at 2006-02-06

Thats the sort of poem that makes you stop and think for a while as it's touching. It realy was a lovely poem, and after reading only so few of your writes i know you have an amazing talent.
never stop writing
x x x

::...Śűĭċĭđĕ-ßłóñđĕ ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-21

Wow, i saw ur name on the forum asking why you weren't mentioned in any of the best poet things, so i thought i'd check out ur work. This was the first one that i went to and i have to say it left an impression on me, true or not, ur words were incredibly strong.

"I told her I loved her and I started to cry
She turned her head away, and silently died"

that stanza there really made the poem hit home, leaves the reader in suspense, because she turned her head away from you when you actually meant that you loved her. Keep up the good work!
- Jenna

dhaval ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-14

Cool poem
please write more often
and make a book
and please please please read a few of my poems n temme how they are

Reiko ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-12

Omg, that is so sad... that seriously brought me to tears... these lines especially...:

-She said âitâs a lie, you donât love meâ
âBut this kitchen knife does and it can set me freeâ

-I told her I loved her and I started to cry
She turned her head away, and silently died

Omg... to sad for words... such a beautiful piece of work. 5/5

hidden-fears at 2006-07-29

Omg,,, that brought tears 2 my eyes ,, you'e written it with such passion and emotion! well done!

jessica ( F ) at 2006-08-11

OMFG ON THE REAL I ADMIRE YOU I HAVE SOME LOVE N RESPECT FOR YOU AND I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITTIN POEMS CUZ YOUR ASS GOT TALENT



LOVE ALWAYS
JESSICA AKA
BIG BADASS NENA

Andi ( F P C ) at 2006-10-07

That is really remarkable poem...its very sad almost bitter-sweet cause he really loves her. your a great writer and should keep up the good work. if u could comment on my work i'd really appreciate it
andi

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

Omg! so sad, but so good... i really liked it though!

Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2007-03-12

Another fantasticly written piece. The story was well told, and the flow was superb. The rhymes were also well crafted, which helped make the emotions so strong. Another great piece.

Brad

sTaRiEyEd at 2007-05-05

Wow i have read this poem a couple times and every time there is something new i feel
it is intense and very meaningful
i loved it and you are truly a great writer

jazmin at 2007-05-07

Woow baby did it just make me cry.... i hope my ex can realize if he loved me before its too late.... wow its such a great piece of writing good work

~*BrokeN SouL*~[hazha] ( C D ) at 2007-05-08

Omg...this was rlli sad nd the poem is written beautifully...well done

joe lamia at 2007-05-10

Excellent!!! Great Job!

Sophia ( C ) at 2007-05-13

That's so sad..

--Sophia

taylor at 2007-05-18

Ur poem is really amazing
im just completely speechless right now..
.:taylor:.


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