Comments - Love is where you are... !

Kaylee ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-04

The repition works for you but I think the exclaimation point works against you. Maybe because I'm not fond of them sinc ethey tend to repersent shouting. The words are really nice and beautiful.

if you can please read: The rag doll

emotionless.19* ( F C D ) at 2006-05-07

What a heartfelt poem.. Really tugs at your heartstrings definately made me smile. Its so hard to see love when we live in a world with so much hate but you really expressed what love is really about. Awesome and amazing job once again!

--emotionless.19*

PoeticXTragedy ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-10

Awww so sweet :]

Gabriela ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-21

This poem is so sweet and so beautifully written. I love it. The whole poem is so original, it has a different approach to the theme. And the end is perfect.
Great job. 5/5
Keep writing.

Kerry ( F C ) at 2006-08-10

I really love this poem becuase this is what i feel deep inside about my friends and there lives if i can make there life better my life is complete. I like the symetry(however you spell it) and the visual you get from this the only thing I wish it had more flow.

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

Very sweet!

Afraid of the Dark ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-26

Wow I love the flow of this poem. . . The repetition has an excellent effect. . .Well done 5/5

Laura
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in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C ) at 2007-03-01

Aw, beautiful, like all of your poems. keep it up!! ill be checking for new work!! hehe

much love and many kisses,
bex

~forgotten~mistake~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-11

Awww, very good. very well written and structured. be proud hunni x x x x x take kare x x x

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-07

Very good poem, Love the ending, very good flow, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Jessica at 2007-04-14

I luv it! This poem made me smile =) I never was good a rhyming but you just perfected it!
5/5!

KAZ ( F P C ) at 2007-09-09

BEA-uuu tifulll wrkkkk... u have some gr8 poems .. but i gues this ones the best... hats off.. to you... keep on writin...

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-30

Amzing piece you have. . I have nothing to say. Great job

Unknown Substance ( F C ) at 2008-01-26

Yet again another great poem you sure have got lots of talent how bout sharing?! Lol

Loved the ending 5.5

XUrXLossXNotXMineX at 2009-01-11

I loved it :]
you write really well <3

Love,
Lisa Marie


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