Comments - The Luckiest Guy

ShadowDancer (Ruby) ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-30

I was left speechless when i finished it. i can relate so well, though you handelled it better then me. sometimes your flow was a bit patchy, but this did not take away from the poem. well done

Shadow dancer

sucidedall ( C ) at 2006-10-01

Hey now that was really good..
butta what wats so special about that girl..
it needs just alittle more discriptive
butta it was awsome..


~passion~ at 2006-10-02

All of your poems are so real and true, I enjoyed reading them, and i think that you are a very talented writer. Don't stop writing, your poems put me in a good mood.

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2006-10-02

Wow this poems so sad yet so beautiful.....i also admire the fact that it's diffrent from anything i ever read....keep up the good work your doin great:)5/5

-Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάмі ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-08

Hey, this is really sad, kind of 'deperate in love' kind of poem, although i think the last stanzas flow is abit broken up, but apart form that, i wouldnt change any of it.
well done, Keep up the Great work
Love Mel

X2892 ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-10

Good poem u have 5/5

Emma Brown ( F C ) at 2006-10-13

Beautiful poem, great emotion 5/5 thanks for your kind words, truly appreciated = ) xxx

disturbed one ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

Not too shabby!...thanks for the comment on mine

Tacha at 2006-11-03

I thought it was very creative and sad..it really nice I liked it lot

© ღ ♥°Sweet Surrender°♥ ( F P ) at 2006-11-09

I really like this poem very creative i give ya a 5!!!!

(AnnMarie) ( F C D ) at 2006-11-11

Sorry but this was not one of my favorites(iv loved your other work) The flow seemed VERY forced in the first few stanzas. Though the thought of this poem was very differnt and that I did like........

Sorry,
-AnnMarie

Daniel Abbott ( F C ) at 2006-11-15

I had to send it to this girl i no lol i so feel u i gave u all the credit but i had to show her that cause i fel u

ily ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-18

Dodadoda.
It made me smile. :]
"I lost myself in her world,
Even though I loved her a lot.
But what could I do?
My words were weaker than I thought."
my favorite part!!! Whootwhoot.
Sad, but another awesome poem. :]
Good Job!!

Fire-lilly ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-22

Very good poem with very good word choice. Seem to be very full of filling. Keep up the good work. 5/5

~if only he knew~ ( F P C ) at 2006-11-29

Awww thats cute you just want her to say something to you

George at 2006-12-08

Wow, I know where you're coming from. Thank you for putting into words the feeling I could not.

Alyson ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-16

That was so sweet......I loved it. It flowed well, but the rhyming was a little stressed. *4/5*

Alyson

¤Kitty¤ ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-22

Thats good. but i think wording could be different.

southernღcharm ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-28

This is such a sweet and wonderful poem. Shows the emotion and the compassion you have towards this one girl and that you ask for him to respect her. Wonderful!
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

mask*over*tears ( F D ) at 2007-01-02

The one who would love the persona in this poem would be the luckiest too!


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