Comments - I will still love you...

Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-30

What a moving poem, very powerful
good job

katrina M.R. at 2005-09-01

Wow..ur poem was awsome dudette! well actually there aren't any words to discribe how good that was! i love it!

Jin ( F C ) at 2005-09-07

I loved this... it was very charming

Gary Jurechka ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-15

Excellent poem!It could use a little tightening up ( scream is used too many times, just little things), but the rhyme scheme is excellent(and as a former zine editor and small press poet, I can tell you it is very hard to pull of a good rhyming poem,and you do).But what really hit me is the emotional impact of loss and love, and the hope...This is a very moving touching piece.Most of my published work is of the love and loss nature and I can really feel everything you are saying, I can really relate.Truly a fantastic piece.Keep writing!

Laura Ashley ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-24

Truly beautiful poem! =]

rainfairy ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-27

There nothing i need to say anymore since most of them had say what i have to say. It's very beautiful.

Emmry at 2005-10-03

Doezn't it suck, how no matter what they do .. you still absolutely love them? Lol the joy of being n love, heh!

Heidi Berlin ( F P C ) at 2005-10-07

Fricken amazing job! i loved it... it's soooooooo good. and the part where "I love you" I never enough... ugh that's so right... soooo right. Nobody ever realizes how much those three words really mean... very good job!

*Heidi

Apollonia at 2005-10-08

I really love your poem it makes me think of me and my man

jessica at 2005-10-21

OMG i loved ur poem! i thought it was great. ur a such good writer. ttul
*jessi*


Tamon G ( F P ) at 2005-10-24

Such a thoughtout poem, i loved it. I can feel the emotions in it, ur a good writer, keep up the good work

mahfoudh at 2005-11-14

Hi how u doin.u have done absolutely a nice work.tell me how could i improve 2 ma level 2 be like u.

monika ( C ) at 2005-11-17

All i can say is wow!!!!!!

Jackie at 2005-11-20

That was a awesome poem!! I loved it!!!

lil devil at 2005-11-22

Yuor poem was great!!!!


XxBuRnTfLeShPoEtIcDeCaYxX ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-02

"The beating of your heart intensifies,
The one bold truth beneath the lies."

best best best line i've ever read in a poem.

steph ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-03

That's really good, you are truly talented. This line worked so well and made me really feel is personally that it made me *tear*
"I love you", But it's never enough,
But, I love you too much to ever give up.
... good job.

Christina at 2005-12-03

That was really good!!

nicki at 2005-12-04

Wow--tht was amazing..ur a great poet

Andrea at 2005-12-09

This poem is so nice i noe wat u feel


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