Comments - The Drunk Driver

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

So sad, i hope this isnt about anyone you know.... but it's a really good poem

Philip at 2007-02-21

Thats so heart-breaking

Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2007-03-12

Well, I can see why this was voted so very highly. It's brilliant. You've just restored my faith in that there are some well written poems on this site, so thanks. For once, there was actually a good story inside, accompanied by a great flow and clever rhymes. Not that you need my congratulations, but congratulations, lol.

Brad

P.S. I obviously marked this a 5/5.

Stefany at 2007-03-26

You gave me shivers.. its soo sad but so great! definetly keep writing

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-06

Amazing poem, really good, i love the style you used and how you wrote it like a story but actually as a poem, and thats hard to do. Great work. 5/5

jazmin at 2007-05-07

Nice job!!!!!! this is a good piece of writting too bad it had to be about death!!!!! but it was really good!!!! wow i wish i could come up wit such words and the rhyming wow it had me shocked!!! i take a long time thinnking for word that rhyme!!!! keep up the good work!!! i look up to you!!!! im very impressed i gotta admit!!!!

if only he knew ( F P C ) at 2007-06-20

Wow this is nice writting and great poem. its very sad and heartbreaking. i like the way you put it as a story. 5/5

laura at 2007-06-22

Wow....didnt expect it 2 be her boyfriend she killed.... :( tears....

Tiffany ( C ) at 2007-06-23

Please tell me that this isn't true???? This was amazing...nicely wrote...just absolutely amazing!!!!

lisa ( F P C ) at 2007-06-30

Wow this is the best write ive read on this site yet.wish i had you r talent well done x

Shamia at 2007-07-10

The endingleft me with my speechless....I loved the poem.

Jess ( F P C ) at 2007-07-13

Wow i really like it. It was a great twist. keep up the good work 5/5

xoxoxo
jess

Ashlea at 2007-07-17

I must say that poem touched me i was knearly crying what you say in all your poems are so true and relate to real life:)
plase give me some tips of how you wright all your poems
xoxoxox

Veamm ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-22

Too bad for the story..but nice nice you do have a talent..5/5 for it

Rookie ( P D ) at 2007-07-23

Nice rhmyes man its saddening

Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

Jasmine at 2007-08-12

OMG I LOVE THAT YOUR POEM IT REALLY GOOD!!!

Katelyn ( C ) at 2007-09-09

I luved the flow of the words and u've really got talent so keep using it. this was such a powerful poem, shook me up a little. great job!

Miranda at 2007-09-13

That was so amazing I put it on my favorites list! :) I gave you a 5/5

stephanie at 2007-09-20

Oh that is so sad but i really love it!


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