Comments - The Luckiest Guy

Tainted Beauty* ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-03

Aww, this is amazing. Very sweet, the girl seems very lucky to have someone that loves her as much as you do, even if she doesn't love you back. I can relate to this poem in a way. Great work, I think I'll go read the other parts now:)

--Steph

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

I loved it ! great job 5/5


becca ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-07

Aww.. this is sd but its soo sweet that you still care about this girl so much your able to be happy for her.. thats great.. and this poem is written beautifully.. you really expressed yourself well.. the flow was iffy at times but the rhymes were good.. nice job!! :D

Laura â ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-13

Wow so sweet poem,so surpsing and yet so heart aching,not so much thing to say,poem does this instead,by the way you'll see i don't deserve to be in your list but if you'll comment please do it to 'my valentine,my love',thanks alot honey,was a pleasure to read it

in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C ) at 2007-02-28

Awwww!! this was sad, so so loving and caring though.

much love and many kisses,
bex

~*SugarCube*~ ( P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Great poem.
Your a great writer.
Keep up the good work!
5/5
take care.

~Chelsea

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Oh my gosh!!! Goran... this is so sad...I know how you feel I'm going through pretty much the same thing right now so this was really good for me I kinda got teary eyed because it made me realize my situation I think you did an excellent job and I'm now adding you to my favorites 5/5

MemoirsOfMe ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-27

I saw you have a lot more Parts to this, and I look forward to reading them. This was great, and it's not like the normal clichéd love poems. It was nice and descriptive, pretty straight-forward to 'it is what it is'. I think you told this character well, and I will defintely be reading more of your work too. Thank you for you're kind comments.

waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-12

A very beautiful poem indeed

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-12

Omg. I love this poem.. I feel the same as you.. Thanks for a wonderful poem I really enjoyed reading your work! :) 5/5!

crystal at 2007-04-13

Wow i love you poem it is awsome keep up the great work

~crystal~

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-18

Wow I loved this one.. yet again its the last two lines that completely sumed up the poem. Its heartbreaking to see someone you loved love another especially if they dont deserve them. At first I was confused about the title but now I see it fits. congrats

*Startle Me* ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-20

I like it.
But it would be better
If you erase the redundancy in it.
For example:
Respect her, please respect her
I mean,
You already said that.
Lol.

Infected With his Deadly Love ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-27

I love this poem.
I think this one was the best one I read out of the four.
It was full of emotion and the flow was flawless.
Keep up the great work 5/5

[Sarah]

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-02

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

Rusheena ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-04

I love it! Was it from a personal experience?

Erin ( F P C ) at 2007-05-08

AMAZING! so beautiful i am speachless.....if this girl knew i bet shed fall for you...(if this is how u feel about a girl?)..... im shoked its really great... cant wait to read the others..keep it up loved to see more

love erin

ashley at 2007-05-09

This poem is absoultly amazing.
i really enjoyed reading it
its very sad.
but sweet at the same time.
this is one of the best poems i have read in awhile.
you write good poems
seriously keep it up


Ashleyy*Marie

Delie ( C D ) at 2007-05-19

Excellent!
i love you how wrote a letterish thing to the luckiest guy who now has your angel.
i also like that you just want her to be treated well and that she's happy with whoever.
you're an amazing guy for this much love.
keep up the greaaaat work.

Jade ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-04

This poem is amazing! It pulls you in from the very start, and I plan to read all the rest of them. You have a really strong talent as your probably already know. Every stanza flows well and every line is another joy to read


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