Comments - I Never Will Forget You (Extremely Long)

XcrissyX ( F ) at 2007-06-23

This poem is the mozt amazing poem i have EVER read! i love it so much...its so touching

you managed to explain a whole story and still keep the rythm and the rhyming...this is deffinatly going in my favorites...and i am going to read more of your poems and maybe put you in my fav writers....i love this so much i have never read a better poem in my whole 14 years!
if this did happen to you im so sorry x
luv crissyx

branelle at 2007-06-23

I ove this poem and i dont care if it was long it was worth reading

Tiffany ( C ) at 2007-06-23

This was a very long poem...but it was worth every second of it!!! Honestly this is the best poem that I have ever read...I'm writing through tears right now....I'm honestly blown away and I feel I have to write and tell you how much your poem moved me!!! Your style of writing is amazing and it just keeps pulling you in..and then hits you with little bombs and explosions!!! Great job...I can't find the words to say to explain to you how much I enjoyed reading this poem! Speechless..it left me speechless!!!

heather ( C ) at 2007-06-23

THIS IS SO GOOD ! i wish that i could write like this .. it was long but good , most poems just drag it out but omg this is beyond words And the words will quickly flow again,

trina at 2007-06-24

That was the most beautiful, sad, loving, poem i have ever read. i am so sorry for your loss. i hope you were able to move on with your life even though i know it was difficult. i just don't know what to say, but, a job very well done. you need to have it published because you are an excellent writer.

Sabree at 2007-06-25

For once in many months i just shed a tear, for the first time ever i cried over someones poetry besides my own. You made me want to keep reading...the story line in it is so sweet and sad. I am unsure how you were able to write that...but i am glad you did. The story it held was the saddest thing i have ever heard. The poem was so strongly written and so...so...amazing. I am unsure of what to say. You have left me speechless. It did not seem long to me at all, i have read poems that are pages and pages long...they are story poems just like this one. These are my favorites for they touch me the most. Do not let go of your dreams of literature for you are a master of this fine art. This poem held so much emotion that it is permantly imprinted in my beating heart. I shall never forget this poem nor you Stephen...your poetry is so pure and so delightfull. I hope so very much that you go far in life and that you do not have the fate of that young man in the poem. Such sadness that would create, for me and many other fans of yours. Live life to the fullest and always know that there is sunshine out there for you and only you. Poetry is that trickle of sunshine. Never let go of it, never subside into the dark for eternity. Let your light shine to others such as myself. This poem has just made my day a whole new day...such emotion that is displayed in here can only be shown by poets as yourself. Let your poetry be heard and never forget that you have a gift. Dont let people get you down no matter what...dont ever feel insecure for you have no reason to. You are an amazing poet and an amazing person. I wish that i knew you in real life...but i am content to know you on here. To know that there are people like you in this world today even though society has corrupted most people. Keep this comment in mind please when you write your poetry, i hope that i am of some help to you. I may not always be able to critique you....but that is only because i am in awe of your ability to write. Keep up the good work for i know that you will go far, i look forward to someday buying your poetry in the nearest book store. I know that you can make it there and even farther...i leave now with content heart and soul. You have put an everlasting tear and smile on my face...if that makes sense to you i do not know, but it does to me more than you shall ever know. 5/5 for this poem...and i am sure you shall get many more of them from me. I hope to see more of your poems that touch me like this one.

-Sabree

pearl at 2007-06-29

Stephen I cried reading this

cait at 2007-06-30

Omg that was ahmazing =(

RaNdOm DoRk at 2007-06-30

Amazing...just truly...amazing!!!
5/5
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emmajayne-xo ( F P C ) at 2007-06-30

Brought tears to my eyes x
very very well done x

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beth at 2007-06-30

I really enjoyed your poem that took alot of strength to write....thanks it was very long but very very good..... i look forward to more , beth :)

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-02

How endearing. Despite of its time-consuming length, this work truly was quite captivating to read. The beginning portion seemed to be an emotional outrage, raving about a romantic disaster and fears. Then the progression at the middle and latter part moved in a rather graphic sequence of event/s. I, however, further noticed that some lines need tightening up, in order to augment its flow. It's no big deal, really. How it was weaved in a fine style of writing thrilled me, nonetheless. An attractive piece. 5/5 ~Marian

pearl at 2007-07-02

I CAN'T GET OVER THIS POEM IT JUST KEEPS COMING BACK OVER AND OVER IT'S SO DEEP WAIST DEEP IN FACT I'VE READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN STEPHEN YOU ARE ONE TALENTED BROTHER AND I HOPE THAT OTHER PEOPLE REALISE THAT & DON'T MIND THE PEOPLE WHO HATE AND DON'T APPRECIATE YOUR WORK NOT EVERY ONE IS AN ARTISTS AND WOULD NEVER UNDERSTAND OUR LEVEL OF MENTALITY

Escoffier ( P ) at 2007-07-03

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

sarah at 2007-07-03

I'm at a lost for words. It's one of the best poems I've ever read. I even shed a tear. excellent poem!

sara at 2007-07-07

Wow that was so beautiful, i could feel/ see the pain, so to speak... that was a wonderful poem and im glad that you got alot of votes

Chelsea ( F P C ) at 2007-07-10

........i dont know what to type....your words were honestly so perfect that i dont want to mar them with my clumsy insignificant words. that was amazing. it really hit the spot. sheesh, im about to cry. that poem just really goes deep. did this really happen, because you make it sound like it did? please write back, as i would love to hear from you, and maybe have you see some of mine, and even comment on some, although i think you already commented on one of them. but id love to hear some more.


~chelsea

Christopher ( F C ) at 2007-07-10

This was very sad im sorry to hear that this happened true or false it is very sad an emotional. So this was a gay relationship that fell apart due to suicide? cause thats how I understood it from this stanza
"I was his boyfriend
I've been torn apart
I thought he had left me
-- thought he'd broken my heart..."

Very WEIRD and Very sad...

Shamia at 2007-07-10

OMG.....This is the best poem I have read in my life....Im speechless...it was beautifully written and very heart felt....WOW!!


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