Comments - To My Unborn Child...

David Brendan ( C ) at 2005-07-24

A great way for any man to live his life. You created a really wonderful thing here

Emilie at 2005-07-24

How beautiful is that poem?!?! I'm sure you'll be a great dad! take care n keep up the fab work!

Heather at 2005-07-24

that is a beautiful poem. i loved it. if you really are a soon to be dad congrats. i would imagine your really excited. good luck w/ your child. great poem again!!

Grace ( F C D ) at 2005-07-24

This was so beautiful. :) Great job!

noraida ( F P D ) at 2005-07-24

That was beautifull.........5/5

kat at 2005-07-24

i think id have to invent a new word to descripe that. just wow.
keep it up, kat

Samantha at 2005-07-24

Awesome job! Are you expecting?

melissa at 2005-07-24

that was a amazing poem. i really really liked it!

destiny ( C ) at 2005-07-24

wow-that was just SO SWEET! man...*sighs* i wanna have a kid or four some day...hope i can still write by then-and maybe even a bit like you-but i doubt it-i got so much to learn...well, i wanna say that that really touched to it-whether i can relate to it or not...so thanx-for writing such an awesome poem....+_+...laterz...

mekala at 2005-07-24

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....thats soo sweet...its soo touching and stuff.love it!
-mikki

not alrite... at 2005-07-24

oh wow!!! thats so sweet i love your poem...keep up the good work...

EarlyBird01 at 2005-07-25

oh my gosh, i loved that! it was so wonderful...and all that stuff you added to you son at the bottom was just so wise....your son is soooo lucky to have a dad like you, and your wife is really lucky too...keep that kind of mind when you raise your child, ok? i'm sure you'll be a great father...good luck, and congratulations!

*TwIsTeD*PeRsOnS*ImAgInAtIoN* ( F P C ) at 2005-07-25

thats awesome..sounds like ur gunna b a gr8 dad


Lil Luce ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-25

*jaw drops* is there anything else i need to say...touched

xxxLoUxxx

Brooke at 2005-07-25

Congradulations! I hope that you are proud of yourself. You are a good poem writer.

Lori at 2005-07-25

awwww thats a good poem!!!

Jane at 2005-07-25

wow awesome poem. i loved it

Erica at 2005-07-25

this is one of the sweetest poems i've ever read!!!! Great Job!!!! You're going to be a great father.

Lisa ( F C D ) at 2005-07-25

I have'nt been on the site in a while but I recieved the automated email with your poem on it...and you know what I thought it was amazing, I d love to have a son or daughter of my own...but I guess it will happen when things are right........this poem shows love and adorement and everything else you feel for a child....its perfect...I could'nt have written a poem like this better myself.

You have real talent that would be envied by a lot of great writters out there. Keep writing as you'vve got a fan now.

Lisa

mariel at 2005-07-25

awwwwww that is so cute!! how old r u?


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