Comments - The Luckiest Guy

XxWorthlessxX ( F D ) at 2007-06-06

Aweuhh. this is a really good poem. really sad. I really liked it. It was a really good write. Keep it up! 5/5

`-jackie.

Alex ( F C D ) at 2007-06-16

Aw that was beautiful. I'm going to read the rest like this one.

~Alex~

Cherise ( C D ) at 2007-06-20

Wow, i realy can relate to this one, froma girls perspective that is :p It's a crappy feeling and it makes one have so many thoughts and emotions, and you seem to have captured that perfectly in the poem, i really enjoyed reading it

great job :)

On Cupids Bad Side ( F C ) at 2007-06-21

That was so beautiful. Made me drop a tear :(
Great job.

livin in a lonely hell ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Omg this was such a good poem emotion flowed through each word just as it should this is a great piece of work

livin in a lonely hell ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Omg this was such a good poem emotion flowed through each word just as it should this is a great piece of work

Nicole ( F P C ) at 2007-07-10

Aww this is so sweet i love it! you're a really great writter! keep it up...and also thank you for your comment i really appreciate it!

barbara ( F P C ) at 2007-07-12

Awww...how sad and beautiful and...wow!!! this is a really great poem!!! love it!!! 5/5

Hopeless Romantic ( F C D ) at 2007-07-15

I like this one. And I can very much relate. Though I dont like talking about an ex. great poem though! xxx
Mike

Gab at 2007-08-03

It was very nice, and well written.
Although stanza 4,5, and 7 were a bit shaky in terms with the rhyming, the general flow of the poem was very good. Your ideas were well spread out and it is a very beautiful poem. And I like how you use proper grammar. I don't know why, but netspeak in poems bugs the hell out of me lol.

Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

Emily E Mehigan at 2007-09-25

Sucks that you hurt like this. I like the flow of your poems.<3

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-30

Great piece you have there. Amazing! Keep it up!

rachel at 2007-12-29

Wow. i loved it, good work :)

girly at 2008-05-24

Amazing writer. absolutely amazing.

RiCEBUNNY ( F C D ) at 2009-03-05

Sad poem but it was very well written. I really liked your word choice and I can really understand/relate to this poem. Great job!

bOlly danCer ( F C ) at 2009-05-19

Really missed reading your poems..
soo much pain...

take care

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-05-12

Your like a Guru at Poetry. I wish I had good writings like this. Even out of the 93 ive written haha over a 4 year progress of trying to get better at it.

Good poem, i like this.
ian


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