Comments - To My Unborn Child...

Mysticaljazlyn ( F C ) at 2005-07-25

hey this is very sweet I really like it I hope you and your wife and son have a great life together enjoy it....you only live once

andrea ( F C D ) at 2005-07-25

omgosh! i loved this poem. at first i thought it was gonna be about abortion but it turned out awesome! wow amazing job. defently 5/5

Jodi at 2005-07-26

That is a great poem you are going to be a wonderfull dad congrats

HARRIET at 2005-07-26

WOW! THAT WAS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL! I KNOW YOUR WOMAN IS VERY PROUD! HEY GUYS TAKE NOTES! I PRAY FOR YOU AND YOUR LADY A BEAUTIFUL"HEALTHY BABY! AND GOD BLESS !KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING! MS HARRIET ONE LOVE!

Terry Vaughan ( F C ) at 2005-07-26

great poem and good luck mate you'll be a great dad hope i'll be a dad soon

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beachbabeaff ( P C ) at 2005-07-26

great poem i really liked it it was awesome 5/5

Mistaken Identity x ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-26

Truly amazing and inspirational, if all fathers (and fathers to be) were like you the world would be a better place. Best of luck with your son,
great poem

Sammi xxx

sheri at 2005-07-27

this poem is great i love it!!!!

Pilar ( F C ) at 2005-07-27

AAAWWWW
I LOVED YOUR POEM, REALY LOVED IT
WOW
it's so powerfull
CONGRATULATIONS
you're gonna be such a great dad,
you son is gonna be so happy when he reads it when older!!
keep writting, your very talented
and i hope the best for you and your wife and you're son

take care, bye
...pili

HiddenxSoul ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-27

That was amazing! So positive and bright. If it is true - congrats! I hope your son arrives safe and sound.

emily at 2005-07-27

i love the technique you use when writing.
your very good at poetry, so keep at it.
plz read my poems and comment, i'm new here and i have never written poems before so plz cud u give me some advice or somwthing thanx emily.

Angel at 2005-07-27

i loved this poem i have a son of my own and it decribes evrything i've ever wanted him to know it was great keep it up

Chelsea at 2005-07-27

*sigh* how wonderful...*tear*

molli at 2005-07-27

this was a very great poem and it almost made me cry!

Christine at 2005-07-27

this is one of the best things i have ever read its beautiful. Those are the sort of things i want for my son your child will be really lucky :)

a girl ( F C D ) at 2005-07-28

Your poem truley touched my heart and you have a wonderfulo talent,I hope that you enjoy your son and he becomes everything you want him to be.

ria at 2005-07-28

really awesome poem

Ashlee ( F ) at 2005-07-28

Awsome poem!


Julia Barnett at 2005-07-29

Thats is absolutly beautiful.....

Ace at 2005-07-29

Brilliant!


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