Comments - Ending Her Cries

Lily Nadal at 2012-08-05

This poem is wonderfully beautiful and sad. i loved it :) great job.

Karrington at 2012-08-25

That was beautiful.... 5/5.

Karrington at 2012-08-25

That was beautiful.... 5/5.

Alyssia at 2012-10-09

Love the poem. As for pagerism... it deffinately exists... I am sad that someone needed to steel this from you.

carrie at 2012-12-18

That was a very good poem it made me almost cry...i love it

ImmortalWiccan ( C ) at 2012-12-30

Thats a good poem i wish someone cared about me that much to do something like the guy in the poem did

ImmortalWiccan ( C ) at 2012-12-30

Thats a good poem i wish someone cared about me that much to do something like the guy in the poem did

Sarah at 2013-01-02

5/5

beautiful

CathyButterflyJC ( F P C D ) at 2013-01-04

I really liked this poem, it is sooooo awesome

brandi at 2013-02-20

This is a good one if i had someone that care that much about me it would be amazing

Sara at 2013-02-28

Beautiful poem

Maydee ( F ) at 2013-03-21

I only have one word to describe this poem...beautiful. The emotion that the reader feels while enjoying this poem is just amazing.

carlinda martin at 2013-03-28

Awesome I love it!!!!

Adriana Avila at 2013-05-14

Absolutely amazing write. Congrats to you.

Keep writing.

beautiful nightmare at 2013-08-01

Wooow this poem is great can't stop reading it

beautiful nightmare at 2013-08-01

Wooow this poem is great can't stop reading it

edy ( F P ) at 2013-09-17

LOVE IT! ITS ALLOT LIKE MY STYLE!!! GREAT STUFF.

-edy-

seemal at 2013-10-05

Well done I loved it :)

sarah at 2013-10-24

Amazing poetry it really was moving thank-you :)

cody at 2013-10-29

This poem is a story of love and tragedy. It showed love as the boy's adoration of the
girl and his protective anger.The beautiful part of this poem is the sacrifice the boy made, though with the sudden misguided temper and his death, the poem left a feeling of loss or emptiness. This could have had more resolution.


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