Submission date : 2008-03-22
Last edit : 2008-05-02
Singing in the Rain ( F P C D )
Wow, I really loved this! You expressed your feelings perfectly and you wrote so this so beautifully. This was my favorite part:
"Have you ever promised your self,
I'm over this person once and for all.
Then all it took was one look,
And once again you'd fall."
Your whole poem said so much, and you got the message across clear, so nice job on this!
Wow that was so good, i wish i could write like you. lol.
Xx 2 huRt 2 CaR3 xX
I love dis 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
Himalee ( P C )
So the way i feel nw!
The Open Closet ( F C D )
Beautiful, and yes of course i understand!