The ugly faced gurl,.

by Khate

Gosh im so happy!
'coz my crush caught me
looking at him!
he says to me: "damn you!"
he is so goodlooking!

last time
he push me
and my nose bleeds
'coz i touch him (blushing)
im really in love with him!,
at least ive expirience touching him,right?

then he ask for my picture,
shit!,im so beautiful!..
he says that
he's going to hire a killer
to kill me,
SWEET!i love him forever!,..

 

Submission date : 2008-03-23

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Anthony Doubal ( P C D ) at 2008-03-23

Haha this is funny but sad at the same time
really good

5/5

sweet escape ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-23

Wow.....um i think you should change the title form girl to guy because he is the ULGY one (maby not on the outside but definatly on the inside).

love the poem though.
it is deep and has a real feeling about it.
5/5

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-24

Very unusual poem wih at least two parodox

Kail ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-24

I didn't really like it. =/ It's strange and I didn't like how you didn't spell out some words and you didn't use very good punctuation. (Blame my mother! She's a language arts teacher!!)

But still, it was quite an idea. Even if the guy is a jerk.