Submission date : 2008-03-23
Anthony Doubal ( P C D )
Haha this is funny but sad at the same time
sweet escape ( F P C D )
Wow.....um i think you should change the title form girl to guy because he is the ULGY one (maby not on the outside but definatly on the inside).
love the poem though.
it is deep and has a real feeling about it.
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
Very unusual poem wih at least two parodox
Kail ( F P C D )
I didn't really like it. =/ It's strange and I didn't like how you didn't spell out some words and you didn't use very good punctuation. (Blame my mother! She's a language arts teacher!!)
But still, it was quite an idea. Even if the guy is a jerk.