Forever?

by LilBit

So You Told Me Oneday,
That We Would Always Be Together.
But When Worst Comes To Worst,
Wat Happens 2 Forever?

Forever Isn't As Long As It Used To Be,
& I Guess Love Doesn't Mean The Same,
What Ever Happened 2 You And Me?
Could We Ever Rekindle The Flame?

The Flame That Burned Out So Long Ago,
Do You Have Atleast One More Match?
So We Can Light It Again, & Start Where We Left Off,
So The Two Pieces Of My Heart Can ReAttach?

It Went From The Best Feeling In The World,
To The Worst In History,
I Apologize For All My Mistakes,
You Deserve Every Bit Of Me.

So Can We Please Try This Just One More Time.
I Promise I'll Do Things Right.
Please Say You'll Give Me One More Chance,
So I Can Get Some Sleep Tonight.

For Ever Isn't As Long As It Used To Be,
& I Guess Love Doesn't Mean The Same.
What Ever Happened To You And Me?
Could We Ever Rekindle The Flame?

 

Submission date : 2008-07-25
Last edit : 2008-07-25

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Latest comments

Lil Ash at 2008-07-31

Amazing Job Well Done really good write kepp it up :)

lone princess at 2008-08-01

It is like a song..without melody...but with a harmony that'll let you feel like as if you were somewhere you've never been...its soo nice...

LoveTear ( F P C ) at 2008-08-02

Wooow very deep ... I love it !

Jaliah Lloyd at 2008-08-15

I think that this poem is so true i know where you coming from in this poem i have felt that way to in life about me and a person. Where is forever when you and a person fall out.

Martha ( F P C ) at 2008-08-18

Ik this feeling. that's y i hate saying forever in relationships, bc more often than not, it's not true. nice job :)



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