What you are to me

by Randy East

Tender eyes of Sapphire
Hair as rich as gold
Everything about you fits gods perfect mold


Passionate and perfect
Essence of a rose
Rivers run ramped rearing
For the ground that you have chose
Earthquakes e'er endure the
Casual calming you impose
Time turns totally timid and in your wake it slows


With every first letter of this poem
I express what you are to me
Forever, now, and for all
Eternity


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Submission date : 2004-06-04
Last edit : 2012-05-24

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Chris Loves Caro ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-14

Wonderful! The selection of words were perfect. I can bet that everyone understands the message behind it. Well done!

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-10

Again another beautiful and emotional poem by you. Well written, 5/5. Em

mello193 ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-29

Really sweet. whomever this was to is very lucky to have such a beautiful thing written about them!

Everlasting ( F C D ) at 2012-05-23

I like your love poems, they are sweet.

Lofallenve ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-24

Sneaky sneaky. I never noticed it was an acrostic until you pointed it out! Loved it!!
:D
5/5



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