Still I Cry

by Karl Wild GG23

Still I cry when I think of you,
Alone, where nobody can see,
Hurts not knowing what to do,
Are you still in love with me?

Still I cry when I see you smile,
Nothing made me feel as alive,
I'd die to hear you laugh awhile,
Without you it's hard to survive.

Still I cry when the phone rings,
Knowing your not on the other end,
The happiness your voice brings,
A broken heart would surely mend.

Still I cry in my lonely dreams,
You always used to meet me there,
Pillows smother my silent screams,
In a bed we no longer share.

Still I cry as tear filled river's flow,
Without your love I'll surely die,
Still, I see your face wherever I go,
If you've ever wondered why, still I cry....

 

Submission date : 2008-09-02
Last edit : 2008-11-12

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Rating : 4.9

Latest comments

Ashley at 2008-09-08

This poem is amazing. It hits home in so many ways. Right now i feel excatly like that! You have a wonderful and amazing talent!

Joshua Lee at 2008-09-10

5/5! cliche of course, but no tale can grow too old if told well!

countryprincess at 2008-09-12

I can realate to how you feel. its hurts to know that people could hurt people like us. i am sorry you have to deal with the pain of loosing someone you loved so dearly. 5/5

Crystal Gaze ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-14

Your writting is simply gripping. I love every word you put on the page; everyone fits perfectly.
This peice was sad. I could feel the desperation...the sadness, and the love left behind.

Truly Amazing,
5/5
-Elaine.

ReBecca ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-18

Awww, what a sensitive guy. Okay, well for me the poem was a little choppy in places but was still beautiful and I liked it.



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