I need you tonight

by Ingrid

Baby, I am so cold
Spread your angel wings
and let me come inside
Sorry for being so bold,
but there are so many things
I can no longer hide

I need your body,
warm and strong
Feel you skin to skin
Hear the unchained melody
of our lovers song,
the divine overture of sin

Make love to me
all through the night
Fill me with all of you
Honey, don't you see
I am burning up inside
Do you feel the same way too?

 

Submission date : 2008-09-18

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Bassel Samman ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-21

Very nice poems, very passionate. It was hot and spicy, yet tender and soft. My heart was lost between comfort and being turned on lol. An exciting read indeed.

Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-21

Very good poem! : )
i think so many people can relate to feeling that way and wondering if the person they feel that way towards shares that emotion
great wording! : ) 5/5

Sorinity ( C D ) at 2008-09-22

Wonderful job! i love the abc rhyming pattern, not seen very much. great to see a poet go somewhere new :D cant wait to read more, keep it up

Mizuki at 2008-09-23

I like this very muchs!
Very goods!!!! 5/5

Grant Gilbert ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-26

Again a very nice warm and sensual poem, you come through with a lot of wanting and need in this poem, even a sense of longing?
Well done

Grant



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