Reverie

by Beautiful Chaos

I wish to dream the day away
Lost in thought of yesterday
When tender lips caressed my skin
Drew me down and pulled me in

Those eyes that spoke of raw submission
Mind and body, requisition
Demanding hungers, unquenched thirst
Pounding hearts about to burst

Alas the ringing wakes my mind
I'm back at work and undefined
Within the crowd, just a face
A secret lust I can't erase

I bear the minutes, count the seconds
Through it all your memory beckons
Soon I'll race to be with you
Living what my daydream knew

 

Submission date : 2008-10-28

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Votes : 15
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Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

Congrats for a beautiful Poem....What a treat to see the weekly winners this week :)
RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

The excellence is self evident

great work

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

This is an excellent write and very good flow. The words roll off your tongue with ease. Wonderful topic and evokes memories of years past.

I think this is my favorite verse, because I can remember those days.

I wish to dream the day away
Lost in thought of yesterday
When tender lips caressed my skin
Drew me down and pulled me in

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-10

Heartfelt congrats on your win...beautiful poem with great sentiment and rhyme and flow awesome!

Ian ( F C ) at 2008-11-13

The best one i have seen yet on this website.
i really enjoyed reading this one and it made all perfect sense and it reminds me of my old memories.
thank you!



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