Learning to Dance in the Rain.

by Courageous Dreamer

-`Written for a Contest.`-

Droplets of rain fall down upon our bodies,
splashing randomly on the cold ground,
drenching our clothes as we dance close.
Your arms securely wrapped around my waist,
my hands gently placed upon your shoulders.

Your guiding steps direct me through the puddles,
as we dance seductively to the rhythm of the rain.
Your delicate fingers run through my coarse brown hair,
then cup my oval shaped face as you stare attentively
into my gorgeous blue eyes, yearning a passionate kiss.

Suddenly you press your delicate lips upon mine,
luring me in closer, keeping me warm within your arms.
My ear placed perfectly on your heart listening to the beat,
as it sings to me those three words I love to hear.
Embraced so tight, forever in your arms I will remain.

The beautiful smell of love lingers throughout the air,
as two lovers learn to dance in the everlasting rain.

 

Submission date : 2008-11-19
Last edit : 2012-04-20

Visits : 11920
Votes : 50
Rating : 4.6

Latest comments

robert adrien flores ( F P C D ) at 2010-06-10

Awesome! i loved the emotion on this one

Brillant aka Sunshine ( F P C D ) at 2010-10-31

TEmpsi, I think I remember this poem..reminds me of the old club with Anna.

I love the entire poem, with it's coherence, word choice,wording and atmosphere.
The description was perfect, and the flow was even better. I was not surprised at all by the tightness and strength of your expression, cause that's something I always expect when reading your work ^_^; but was impressed sure by the ability you have in bringing for us readers that images crystal clear.

Was a nice , lovely view.
>>.your last 2 lines, been such a bomb ..I was too much diving within the happiness and positiveness of their impact!

5/5 SURE

Lizzie ( F P C D ) at 2011-02-01

Dancing in the rain like that with someone you lofe must be magestic

Kasy at 2011-06-16

Nice :)
Bet You Won The COntest huh ? "]
-Kasy <3<3 --

PoetryKnight ( F C ) at 2011-07-07

Wicked awsome poem, definatly caught my eye with the attention it got. and i have danced in the rain, i love the rain, especially a hard down pour. The smell, the feel, even the taste. well done with the description and out pour of the feelings in this poem. a 5/5 indeed, keep writting, and put out poems likes this, I'll keep reading.

From the PoetryKnight.



[ View all comments (35) ]