Glorious Imperfection (sedoka)

by That Would Be Telling

Optimistic hope,
Glorious imperfection,
Of these we are flag-bearers.

Tragic we remain,
Existence flawed, finite, and
Somehow, capable of love.

*Sedoka- Un-rhyming form of two stanzas, syllable count 5/7/7, 5/7/7. This is my first attempt at one.

Submission date : 2009-04-08
Last edit : 2009-04-08

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