by Live WeLL
Submission date : 2009-09-06
Last edit : 2009-09-06
Hollow Emotion ( F P C D )
Very well written. The flow was awesome and the stanzas were amazing. Well done!!
suicidalkansas ( F P C D )
Wow, it was amazing!!!! wonderful job.. I can personally relate to in and that just made it even better to me...Everything just flowed so smoothly and was pieced together so great! The title did give it away a little but for how great the poem was it just completly surpassed that. Great great job 5/5
MERCY is never shown ( F P C D )
Ok i think everyone can relate to this because everyone has been or will be broken like that and the vulnerability you show well you seem to capture but a minute in time the moment each nighth when you think how they really are the most beautiful scene when someone is broken and you captured it amazingly
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
I hate that people put i instead of I you have once and the poem is excellent and I have voted so 5/5 but the last line for me need a bit of attention (for the strength ) perhaps? Ray S
Wow i really liked it. Its amazing! Great flow to it and emotion. Beautiful poem.