Come Stay With Me...

by Dreamofolwin

Come stay with me, and be my love.
Please dry my silent tears, because...
Too long my heart, has been denied.
Too many days, I've sat and cried.


For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home..

You've took my hand, and walked a while.
You've cheered my heart, and made me smile.
You've shown me love, I'd never known,
Friendship, care, that now has grown.

Come stay with me, and be my love.
I need you now, want you because.
Forever captured, is my heart,
You won it from, the very start.
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Submission date : 2009-09-13
Last edit : 2009-09-13

Visits : 13092
Votes : 12
Rating : 5.0

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PinkyPrincess ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-19

Beautiful!!! I love poems about love and you did a wonderful job with this one!

Pain Redefined ( F C ) at 2009-09-20

Wow, that was beautiful all the way through. love the flow and rhyming was spot on. Really nice poem 5/5

Jackie ( F C ) at 2009-09-28

A truly beautiful poem. Written with such love and emotion.
For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home

Excellent!!!!! 5/5

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-29

A very beautiful piece, brought tears to my eyes.
"For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home.." < I loved this stanza. 5/5, Em

Kuro ( F P C D ) at 2010-04-06

Every stanza spoke a little part of me. i really enjoyed this Olwin. i think im going to favorite this :D



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