Loves first strike

by Lisa

When love first strikes
Your heart will burn
Your head will go dizzy
Your stomach will churn
You'll start to lose balance
The room will spin around
You'll start to feel weaker
Your heart starts to pound
Words in your head
Will get lost in a whirl
Instead of thinking
Your mind will twirl
Love is so passionate
So beautifull and sweet
Without love theres no life
No breath...no heartbeat.x

Submission date : 2009-10-29
Last edit : 2009-10-29

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