The Touch (Loop Poetry)

by Sylvia A

Hands so strong, yet so soft, a delicate touch
touch me, arouse the desire hidden deep within,
within my lonely soul, waiting for you to light the fire,
fire that smolders just beneath the surface of my skin.

Caresses sear feeling where there was none,
none until today when you reached out to fulfill,
fulfill the need to love you with abandonment once again,
again your hands created reality, a dream come true.



Copyright © 2009 Sylvia All Rights Reserved

Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last
word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme
scheme is abcb.

Variations:

1. Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

2. One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.

3. Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.

Submission date : 2009-11-01
Last edit : 2009-11-01

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