Until We Meet Again

by Karl Wild GG23

I can still recall with immaculate precision,
The night we met under starlit skies.
An angel so precious once impossible to envision.
Was now standing right before my eyes.

I remember our laughs and late night talks,
At least a hundred times we'd say goodnight.
Holding hands through Central Park walks,
Even when wrong, you were always right.

Or the time we danced near Willow Pond,
I held you so close under the pouring rain.
Your love took me to ecstasy and beyond,
The taste of your kiss, sweet champagne.

The day I knew you loved me I'll never forget,
You let down the walls protecting your heart.
Showed me the little girl in you with no regret,
Thought I knew then and there we'd never part.

Love lasts so long and times without ending,
Now we both know hearts truly can change.
We must move on, little use in pretending,
Just know our memories I'll never exchange.

I'll forever think of you under starlit skies,
Laugh at the cute little girl you hid inside.
Promise I won't forget we hate goodbyes,
Or all the times I held you when you cried.

Still even now its unbearable to say goodbye
Can't let my heart know this is really the end.
I won't forget you beautiful wouldn't dare to try,
So for now my love, my heart, my friend.....


Until we meet again.

 

Submission date : 2010-02-23
Last edit : 2010-02-24

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Pingu ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-10

What can I say? Your write is deep with emotion, enough to fill the seas. The story told was just beautifully sad. Your flow was right on. I can not critque on anything that you write. Love is beautiful, yet brings us sadness... eh?

Minkus ( F P C D ) at 2010-07-12

This is a great write. My only complaint is that in the last two stanzas, you used "goodbye" at the end of a line two times in quick succession, which kind of stuck out as a bit redundant. The buildup at the very end was excellent. I hope these love poems are being read by whoever they're written to :)

XxFallenxFromxGracexX ( F P C D ) at 2010-10-26

Beautiful pleasure to read
5/5

Teenage Hysterias ( F P ) at 2011-04-25

Oh my gosh.
amazing.
period.

mira ( F P C ) at 2011-05-09

Bravo karl
you really know how to pass your masseg
every time i read this poem i cry its so true
good work



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