Waiting Game

by Justin

He see's it in her eyes,
that she have been hurt before in the past,
Her heart has felt the touch of love,
but never did it last

Moments go by and she starts to think,
maybe this is the one,
But whenever her heart starts to feel love,
All she does is Run

He's everything she's wanted,
but she just cant seem to let him in,
Because her hearts been hurt before,
and she promised herself never again

Just take some time and listen,
See where you need to start,
Time and Patience is what it takes,
to mend a broken heart,

No matter how many months or years it takes,
1,2 or even 3,
Waiting for someone special just shows,
how special it can really be,

 

Submission date : 2012-02-17

Visits : 1896
Votes : 13
Rating : 4.7

Latest comments

Rihanna Babez ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-11

Wow speechless !!!!

This was such an amazging poem that many girls life is like this(: I can relate to it love just beatiful(:

5/5 from Mee x

Liliana ( F C D ) at 2012-03-18

How beautiful :) great poem

Janna Antal at 2012-04-21

Loved it!

crishmerl ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-23

--I like the poem and it is so relatable for some people who been hurt before...and frustrated in the means of love. Yet, it not easy to open your heart again and to welcome love into you heart because of the past that you anticipate some way you will be hurt when you love again...

"He's everything she's wanted,
but she just cant seem to let him in,
Because her hearts been hurt before,
and she promised herself never again"

--Well, this part tells that the girl withdraws herself and constrain her heart not to in love again. I like the ideas here.

Just take some time and listen,
See where you need to start,
Time and Patience is what it takes,
to mend a broken heart,

--Yeah, I agree in this part when you trying to let that person loves you... you must have patience and time to wait it until the wound of her heart heal..."it takes time to mend a broken heart" love this line...

No matter how many months or years it takes,
1,2 or even 3,
Waiting for someone special just shows,
how special it can really be,

--Well, the ending part is good, too. I really enjoy reading this. Keep writing more:))
5/5
~C

Thomas ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-24

Nice poem, good rhythm.

Only downside was the grammatical error at the start (have should be has)
This messed the rhythm up a little but still a good poem.
Keep it up!

4/5



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