by DirtRoadGirl
Submission date : 2012-03-09
Mag ( D )
at 2012-03-11
"I'm hiding behind lies,
just smiles in a frame. "
I like this part mostly, you don't want to reminisce sad moments in the future nor spread it even though you hurt now.
Keep up good work !
DirtRoadGirl ( F P C )
at 2012-07-22
Thank you :)
Girl of Conviction ( F P C D )
at 2012-04-02
Pain breaks through my heart,
and I sink to the floor.
I am falling apart,
and I can't pretend anymore.
<This is my fav part of your poem :] its very emotional which makes it great :]
its true u cant tell alot just by looking at a smile in a frame but looking beneath it is a different story :]
great job!
5/5
<3 :]
Tammi Toxic
DirtRoadGirl ( F P C )
at 2012-07-22
Thank you :)
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