by Khalid
Submission date : 2012-06-16
Last edit : 2012-06-17
mandy ( F P C D )
at 2012-06-18
Admirable work, to me the rhyming DIDN'T seem forced even though you used the same rhyme throughout the poem. Wonderfully done, I'm impressed. It was also a very sweet poem, 5/5!
mandy :)
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