Fear of white

by Average thoughts

This poem is about a woman whose husband is in army .

In the morning
when you will go,
Happiness of my eyes
will start to flow.

Forgetting
these days of unending delight,
I will continue my breath
in fear of white.

Every moment will go busy,
singing your song.
And in remembering you,
things would go wrong.

When my urge for you
refuse to hide,
I will begin to sleep
on your side.

My heart will stop at places,
we had fun.
And I will melt with candles
till your return.

Submission date : 2012-06-18
Last edit : 2012-06-18

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Mukund Jha at 2012-06-28

Its nice buddy...

Innocent Fairy ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-02

Wow..........
Indescribable, I'm completely speechless
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SociallyQuaint ( F P C D ) at 2012-08-14

Emotions were clear and the added touch of rhyme was not bad, another good piece.

Amreen ( F P C D ) at 2012-10-16

Wonderfully, incredibly, fantastically emotional... I could feel the emotions of this poem... the words, the flow is amazing, I am completely in sync with reading this... And the imagery is perfectly apt and draws a sad image which fills me with emotions .
Excellent:)