Submission date : 2012-06-30
Lioness ( F P C D )
It was all that boobie talk we had wasn't it lol
Maple Tree ( F P C D )
Now I just have to say this... You took this challenge and ran with it... I loved your sensual and playful tone that you took within each stanza... fun in the kitchen... what a fun, sensual, and passionate, playful write Chelsey!
Willow ( F P C D )
DAMN girl.... that was HOT!! If skipping a meal was always like this, I'd be skipping a meal everyday... love it!!
You have come such a long way with your writing in the last 7 years that I have known you, I am so very proud of you Chelz, keep up the amazing work...
The Prince ( F C D )
Haha, this is great. Good pace, light hearted and sensual without being dramatic. Fun :)
PinkyPrincess ( F P C D )
Wow, this was a very passionate poem... and it's funny because I didn't expect it at all! Oddly enough I was expecting a poem about diet or skipping meals to lose weight or 'fit in' or something similar to that from the title! I love being surprised while reading a poem, and this poem did that for me.
I love how you started it - and I must say the descriptions were lovely. I like how you said you were wearing an apron and that this person was 'jealous' of it... that made me laugh and smile... it's a thought that sometimes crosses our minds but we rarely would say out loud!
Great job with this poem hon :)