Lostlove1 ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-19

I thought this was a lovely piece, made me smile :)

The Poet Behind The Poems ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-22

Haha sorry I was just reading the comment too short and unrealistic ... Obviously someone needs to google haiku .... I love criticism but that sounded really blunt and didn't explain the reasons for the. Strong statement ... But Yess a really good attempt I personally don't like using words like gainest and but nothing major really good images :)

The Poet Behind The Poems ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-22

Haha sorry I was just reading the comment too short and unrealistic ... Obviously someone needs to google haiku .... I love criticism but that sounded really blunt and didn't explain the reasons for the. Strong statement ... But Yess a really good attempt I personally don't like using words like gainest and but nothing major really good images :)

anand singh ( F C ) at 2012-07-23

For your first try you've done a wonderful job with this little piece.
You've explained a kiss with deep imagery.
An enjoyable read.

Infinite Catastrophe aka Alisha ( F P C D ) at 2012-08-10

Personally, I am not a big fan of the Haiku. But you have created a piece filled with imagery and passion.
Nice work, especially for a first attempt!