Submission date : 2012-07-16
Last edit : 2012-07-16
sham pulok ( C )
It is awesome.
Waaau amazing i love poems that truly describes situations taking ones thouts into feelings
Naughtymouse ( F C D )
Luuuuuuuuceee!!!! Oh i just adore this write, i love the thought of holding hands and i love the line " even if our hands barley touch"
Dont get me wrong i love it all but this line brings (to me ) a sort of hesitancy which i find soooo endeering and wonderful, made me smile loads!
Love it luuuucceeee!!
Haley Doss ( F )
Amazing:) check out my poetry:)
Blissful ( F C D )
What really caught my eye was the title, so unique! Such a sweet love poem that I couldn't help but smile throughout.
"Let our hands feel, what our hearts
refuse to accept, that indeed, it is love,"
^So true. Oftentimes our heart refuses to accept what it feels because of certain circumstances. You wrote that beautifully here!
The ending was just great! I took it two ways. The first was literally, that even if these two people were not physically one didn't mean they were going to let go of their love. My other interpretation was maybe there is a distance between them and even that won't make them let go of their love. Either way, it was great!
[ Praised by Everlasting | Approved by Larry Chamberlin the Godfather ]